March 23, 2010
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It’s all around us, has been for a while,
Computers, satellites, and many more
Back in the day, we used a sundial
Now we use clocks, although more for décor

Some say we use it too much, cell phones galore
It may feel like it’s taking our future
You can find it in almost any store
I don’t think it will ever have a cure

It separates us from our history
Of what we used to know, a lot is gone
Some pessimists say we will be sorry
When we won’t be able to see dawn

Always remember we brought this on Ourselves
Hope that technology will no longer be on our shelves

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NDeflip said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 12:01 pm
Nice poem it had mad good rhymes :D
flaurel_eve replied...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 5:34 pm
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:22 pm
I really like this poem...although I don't agree with it. I cannot live without these technology necessities! However this is really well-written. It's a different type of poem and topic. Nice job! Check out some of my work if you'd like...Keep writing!
flaurel_eve replied...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 5:33 pm
thanks for the encouragement
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