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Hope..

September 23, 2009
By ps13795 SILVER, Baguio, Other
ps13795 SILVER, Baguio, Other
9 articles 5 photos 43 comments

As darkness covers the bright blue sky
Thoughts fill the air with a resonant sigh
Shadows arrive and shelter the earth
Covering, cleaning out gaiety and mirth
Bright stars peek out one by one
Slowly replacing the big bright sun
But though this blanket of darkness covers us all,
I feel a small stillness within my small soul
As my thoughts and others’ resound with a sigh
Waves of tranquility and peace pass by
And even if darkness surrounds my heart,
That small light inside will never depart…


The author's comments:
Umm.. Again, I wasn't thinking much when I wrote this.. Well.. Again, thanks for reading!!

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on Sep. 9 2010 at 8:16 pm
HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
21 articles 7 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let It Be-The Beatles
Music is the only thing that makes sense any more-Me
Make love, not war-a bunch of people
Roses are red, Violets are blue, I have five fingers, The middle one's for you-Me :)

I loved it!

neerahk said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 6:08 pm
i love reading this article..to the author, keep it up..we are PROUD of You!!

elaybin said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:26 am
i am amazed reading your poems, etc. keep it up!

Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:48 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
13 articles 6 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

I love the flow n feeling to this poem!

Great job ur quite talented:)

I would love ur advice so if you have the chance you should check out some of my poems sometime;)

Roryl SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 6:31 pm
Roryl SILVER, Mt. Olive, North Carolina
7 articles 14 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
God whispers to us in our pleasures, speaks to us in our conscience, but shouts in our pains: it is His megaphone to rouse a deaf world. ~C.S. Lewis

This poem is great! You have a fabulous tone and a nice lilt to your writing. I especially like the line 'thoughts fill the air with a resonant sigh'. It makes a nice picture in my mind!


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