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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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Rkingett This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:07 pm
OMG! this poem is the best! wow! it's a shame it didn't make i in the mgizine. i love the first stanza the best.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:12 pm
Thank You! ;)
Ya I wonder what they looking for sometimes lol all of my fav poems on her aren't in the magazine! lol
Ur poems and stories are really great too:)
 
CaseyLeigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 9:33 pm
This poem is amazing. I don't think there's a person who hasn't seen such change, been through such an experience.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 11:45 am
Thank you:)
Change either makes ya or breaks ya
 
Marie92 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 9:32 am
Aww... my friends been through this. Its a great poem.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:51 am
Thanx for ur comment i appreciate it:)
 
choirchic said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 8:46 pm
i liked this poem. it was really good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:50 am
Thanks:):)
 
Kaity.. said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 10:03 am
I loved this pome...my brothers birthday is in september he died 6 years ago it is deff one on my fav pomes now ..thank you
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:49 am
Awe I'm sorry :(
I'm glad my poem could touch ur heart.
I write for others as much as I write for myself.
 
samm987 said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 3:42 pm
Nice poem i like it
 
~Corrii~ said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:55 am
Awe this is a sweet but sad poem:( but anyways how r u? long time no hear!lol
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:57 am
busy! lol i gotta start using a planner or somethin! lol
 
~Corrii~ replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 11:01 am
Ya u do lol Miss Unorganized! you are horrible with that lol so how's Dan?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 11:05 am
Ya ya ya lol I kno! but hey i wouldn't be me if i was all organized like u! I have to be unorganized to survive lol or atleast thats what i tell myself!;)
 
Brittany O. said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 2:59 pm
i really like this poem. i totally agree with what it says. good job.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:05 pm
thannx:) i appreciate ur opinion!
 
unbreakable replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:09 pm
you are very welcome..lol
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:17 pm
did u read my poems A Gift and To Care? They're two of my "Christian" poems that i thought you might like! :)
 
unbreakable replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:26 pm
yes...and i really like that one "To Care". its really good....
 
Shelley said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 7:41 pm
This was beautifuly written! You did an amazing job. I can relate to this poem...
 
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