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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.




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choirchic said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 8:46 pm:
i liked this poem. it was really good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:50 am :
Thanks:):)
 
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Kaity.. said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 10:03 am:
I loved this pome...my brothers birthday is in september he died 6 years ago it is deff one on my fav pomes now ..thank you
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:49 am :
Awe I'm sorry :(
I'm glad my poem could touch ur heart.
I write for others as much as I write for myself.
 
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samm987 said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 3:42 pm:
Nice poem i like it
 
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~Corrii~ said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:55 am:
Awe this is a sweet but sad poem:( but anyways how r u? long time no hear!lol
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:57 am :
busy! lol i gotta start using a planner or somethin! lol
 
~Corrii~ replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 11:01 am :
Ya u do lol Miss Unorganized! you are horrible with that lol so how's Dan?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 11:05 am :
Ya ya ya lol I kno! but hey i wouldn't be me if i was all organized like u! I have to be unorganized to survive lol or atleast thats what i tell myself!;)
 
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Brittany O. said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 2:59 pm:
i really like this poem. i totally agree with what it says. good job.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:05 pm :
thannx:) i appreciate ur opinion!
 
unbreakable replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:09 pm :
you are very welcome..lol
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:17 pm :
did u read my poems A Gift and To Care? They're two of my "Christian" poems that i thought you might like! :)
 
unbreakable replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:26 pm :
yes...and i really like that one "To Care". its really good....
 
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Shelley said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 7:41 pm:
This was beautifuly written! You did an amazing job. I can relate to this poem...
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 12:41 pm:
Thanx:) i appreciate it:)
 
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mee-mee said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 4:23 pm:
im glad i did check out ur poems! good job. i like this one.
 
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ckalani said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 8:18 pm:
I really like this piece and completely understand what you mean. Feel free to check out some of my own work too. : )
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:25 am :
Thanx for ur comment:) i checked some of ur stuff out n ur rly good!
 
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Ashlie94 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 2:53 pm:
Wow. Dont let anyone say poems have to be long. This is a great poem and u used a lot of good literature. and yes it is very sad. Especially if it is someone you love or a family member or an ex.
-Ashlie
 
Jacee007 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 6:07 pm :
Oh I so agree! Some of the smaller poems on this site are the best...I think you sometimes lose the magic in a poem with too much length...but this truly is a great poem!
 
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