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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it
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hotpink13 SILVER said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 4:06 pm
hotpink13 SILVER, Springboro, Ohio
8 articles 1 photo 12 comments

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there's always a light at the end of the tunnel.(:

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i love it it totally aplies to my life right now (:
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 11:34 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much that is such a compliment! :)
CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 8:19 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

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Astounding is an understatement for this, I love it...you better write more poems if this is your skill level.
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 5:19 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

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no problem~ i am here 2 support!!! (:
Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:50 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

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I agree she's great:)
Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:49 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

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Wow great poem

Luv it
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:24 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank u:):)
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 9:23 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

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you do a good job with making them relate (: you r truly good with poems
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 11:53 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Ok So like

rhyme

no rhyme

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no rhyme

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lol sry i rly promise im not that slow lol
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 11:46 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Yay:) I'm glad

I try rly hard to make my poem relatable:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 11:46 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Awe thank u so much:)
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:35 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

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i love this poem!!! i can totally relate to it!!!
electrichearts SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 3:47 pm
electrichearts SILVER, Franklin Lakes, New Jersey
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"It didn't matter in the end how old they had been, or that they were girls, but only that we had loved them, and that they hadn't heard us calling, still do not hear us, up here in the tree house with our thinning hair and soft bellies, calling them out of those rooms where they went to be alone for all time, alone in suicide, which is deeper than death, and where we will never find the pieces to put them back together. "

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a sonnet has 14 lines and the structure is ABABCDCDEFEFGG. i really liked this, but it isn't exactly a sonnet. :) none the less, nice work!
AlexandraRose BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 9:35 pm
AlexandraRose BRONZE, Port Hardy, Other
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*so beautiful
AlexandraRose BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 9:35 pm
AlexandraRose BRONZE, Port Hardy, Other
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wow! this is amazing. Its just sobuetaiful, and soo true! keep writing! =D
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:31 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Wow thank you so much:)

I truly appreciate your comment

thank u again:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:30 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much:))
bball_chick24 said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 11:44 pm
wow!

i love this peom...

i think that it's awesome and anyone can really relate to it!

i am really inspired by it and it's now my favorite!

nice job keep up the great writing!

its all you! :)
Ashleykimiko BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:55 pm
Ashleykimiko BRONZE, Honolulu, Hawaii
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beautiful sonnet!! great job!!!
PunkRockLobster GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 5:43 pm
PunkRockLobster GOLD, Manhattan, Kansas
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Carpe diem quam minime credula postero (Seize the day, trusting as little as possible in the future)
And if not now, when?

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Well thanks!!(: I hope he does.....you are a brilliant writer!