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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 5:11 pm

dude i love it!!

 

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:40 pm
dude thanx!!!! =D
 
elfiewrites said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:02 pm
I love this, and totally agree with it! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you PLEASE comment on my work, too? Thanks so much
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:40 pm

Thanx a bunch!

Ya I'll totally read n comment on ur work;)

 
Johaa said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 5:53 pm
I love your work! It's like the third time i read this! I would really like it if you gave your opinion in a chapter i posted here ^^
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:39 pm
thank u!!!! I'll def read it n comment!
 
leejeanstar said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:07 pm
i love it! i wish it was longer though. your a great author.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:25 pm
thank u again!
lol i kinda wish it was longer too lol
 
booboo360 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 11:23 am
Okay so I submitted my poem it is called summer girl. Hope u like it.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:23 pm
SWEET!
I can't wait to read it!
 
zack1069 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 11:30 pm
i like it its really simple but good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:23 pm
Thanx;) all of my poems r pretty simple but that have a lot of meaning and emotion behind them:)
 
TylerCruz said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 8:45 am
this is actually pretty good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:22 pm
Well actually thanx:)
lol
 
Katiebrox3 said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 10:40 pm
I really like this, it describes me and my old friend right now. Keep writing, your really good. <3
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:22 pm
Thank u so much:)
n i'm sry about ur friend
i hope only the best for the future!
 
Griffin said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 8:31 pm
this is really good and i really like it. i think everyone can relate
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:21 pm
Thank u:)
I rly try to make my poems as relatable as possible
 
Raychell D. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 1:48 pm
very sweet & sad. we can all relate to the changes and goodbyes that happen over summertime. <3
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:21 pm
thank you:)
Oh yes the heart breaks of summer
 
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