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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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derickaa said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:03 am
very discriptive , usage of alliteraton nd similies were on point . keep up the good work (;
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:53 am

thank u:)

I'm a very metaphorical person lol

 
EmmmyxD said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:59 am
Aww I Like This, Its Easy To Understand And Most People Can Relate To This(:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:53 am
Thank u:) I'm glad u think it's easy to understand...I hate reading poems that are too fancy and completely impossible to understand lol
 
xo0amanda17 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:53 am
this is a great poem ... it makes alot of sence on how people change so quickly and easily.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am
Thanx:) ya change is sometimes a good thing but in this case it wasn't...
 
geeebabyy22 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:52 am
i really liked this poem. it really shows how people really are. great job!!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am

Thank u:)

I'm glad u liked it:)

 
karinaaaxo0 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:48 am
I love this poem. It's very descriptive.
 
EmmmyxD replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:59 am
Yes It Was(:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:50 am
Thank u so much:)
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:56 pm
I just wanted to take the moment to Thank EVERYONE who has ever left a comment:) I truly appreciate every single note...whether it is a compliment or constructive critism I appreciate it all. I not only write for me but also for you all...I want my poetry to touch lives and knowing that I've touched some of yours means a lot to me and really encourages my to keep writing. So THANK YOU ALL again! and everyone keep writing!
 
Valeria C. said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 1:24 pm

Really good! It makes me want to cry.

 

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:51 pm
Awe thank u:) that's sweet!
 
pg13 said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 3:23 pm
Great poem, but, how is this a sonnet?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:50 pm

Thanx:)

it's not it's the first poem i submitted on here n i didn't kno where to put it lol much like the rest of my poems lol ooops! but does it rly matter what it's classified as...don't the words, rhyme, n flow matter much more?

 
maddys.shamless said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 6:48 am
Soooo! Wonderful..words can not describe!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:49 pm
Thank u I rly appreciate the compliment!
 
s.nichole. said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 10:54 am
wow.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:47 pm
Thank u:):)
 
Whisperer said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 9:10 pm
I really like this. it explains so much.  i've watched close friends change throughout the years, for better or for worse. and sometimes it's sad to see them turn in a different direction than you. that you SO much for this. it means alot :) keep writing
 
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