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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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annalisewarnock said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:51 am
This poem was great and im sure alot of people can relate to it. I realllllyy liked it
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:59 am
Thank u soooooo much:) I truly appreciate your comment:)
 
nancy19 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:50 am
it gives very good descriptions and i can imagine the person you are talking about.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:58 am

Thank u:)

I try to be as descriptive as possible I like painting a picture through words:)

 
alessaxoxo said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:49 am
This was very well written. i feel like it has very strong meaning to it and when i read it i can realate to how you are feeling :) <3
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:55 am
Thank you, I really try to put emotion into my poems so I'm glad you felt the true meaning in it:)
 
xlindseyx166 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:41 am
this poems so cute! i love it, good description!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:54 am
Thank ya:)
 
Victoriaaa14 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:06 am
good poem, very discriptive. the similies were good. and it was very meaningful and truee. Good job :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:54 am
Thank u:) I appreciate the comment;)
 
derickaa said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:03 am
very discriptive , usage of alliteraton nd similies were on point . keep up the good work (;
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:53 am

thank u:)

I'm a very metaphorical person lol

 
EmmmyxD said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:59 am
Aww I Like This, Its Easy To Understand And Most People Can Relate To This(:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:53 am
Thank u:) I'm glad u think it's easy to understand...I hate reading poems that are too fancy and completely impossible to understand lol
 
xo0amanda17 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:53 am
this is a great poem ... it makes alot of sence on how people change so quickly and easily.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am
Thanx:) ya change is sometimes a good thing but in this case it wasn't...
 
geeebabyy22 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:52 am
i really liked this poem. it really shows how people really are. great job!!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am

Thank u:)

I'm glad u liked it:)

 
karinaaaxo0 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:48 am
I love this poem. It's very descriptive.
 
EmmmyxD replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:59 am
Yes It Was(:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:50 am
Thank u so much:)
 
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