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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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his_baby_girl said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 11:41 am
this was a really good peom. it was strong and inspiring thanks! :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:01 pm

Thank you very much:)

n ur welcome...I not only write for me but for the reader also;)

 
his_baby_girl replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 11:06 am
thats amazing! how long have you been writing?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 3:45 pm
Umm only bout a year n a half or so lol wbu?
 
Jacee007 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 6:10 pm
I year and a half and you r alrdy this good...wow that's true talent!
 
his_baby_girl replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 11:20 am
for a couple yrs now and im still not that great but i love writing so i learn how to do better and keep it up! :D
 
vnprice said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 8:33 am
I feel like I should tell you, I love you!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:59 am
Awe thank you! Love ya too!
 
Nicholas H. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:59 am
I really liked this poem! I favored it and showed some of my friends it and they liked it as well.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:00 pm
Thank u:) Yay, I'm so glad you and your friends enjoyed my poem...make sure to tell em thanx for me;)
 
annalisewarnock said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:51 am
This poem was great and im sure alot of people can relate to it. I realllllyy liked it
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:59 am
Thank u soooooo much:) I truly appreciate your comment:)
 
nancy19 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:50 am
it gives very good descriptions and i can imagine the person you are talking about.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:58 am

Thank u:)

I try to be as descriptive as possible I like painting a picture through words:)

 
alessaxoxo said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:49 am
This was very well written. i feel like it has very strong meaning to it and when i read it i can realate to how you are feeling :) <3
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:55 am
Thank you, I really try to put emotion into my poems so I'm glad you felt the true meaning in it:)
 
xlindseyx166 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:41 am
this poems so cute! i love it, good description!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:54 am
Thank ya:)
 
Victoriaaa14 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:06 am
good poem, very discriptive. the similies were good. and it was very meaningful and truee. Good job :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:54 am
Thank u:) I appreciate the comment;)
 
derickaa said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:03 am
very discriptive , usage of alliteraton nd similies were on point . keep up the good work (;
 
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