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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on May. 21 2010 at 12:26 pm
kittttykat BRONZE, Sidney, Ohio
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lol, class is a joy with you and abby :)

i love both of you. And SNOOKUMS :)


Madelaine208 said...
on May. 21 2010 at 12:25 pm
Madelaine208, Sidney, Ohio
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abby kiitykat and i love you (:

on May. 21 2010 at 12:23 pm
kittttykat BRONZE, Sidney, Ohio
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i know you too Madelaine208 :)

we are in the same class ! haha,


Madelaine208 said...
on May. 21 2010 at 12:22 pm
Madelaine208, Sidney, Ohio
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iknow you kittykat!

on May. 21 2010 at 12:19 pm
kittttykat BRONZE, Sidney, Ohio
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i agree with snookums :)

lollipop said...
on May. 21 2010 at 10:33 am
lol. i think im in love with you snookums.

on May. 21 2010 at 10:29 am
splenda. SILVER, Century, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities. Truth isn't." Mark Twain

i wanna meet you snookums. youre funny.

Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 10:00 am
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

so very sorry miss.

on May. 20 2010 at 7:27 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you for ur compliment even tho i think some of your other comments are uncalled for...if u want to bash someone take it else where...my poems are meant to encourage others n ur negative comments kind of kill that so if you don't have anything nice to say...please don't say anything at all...

on May. 20 2010 at 7:25 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I'm glad:) I write not only for my own pleasure but for others...so I'm glad you can relate but i'm sry that u had to go thro this also

on May. 20 2010 at 7:24 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

well that's a great thing that u can't relate n i hope it stays that way for u:) thank's

on May. 20 2010 at 7:23 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) ya I will def check out ur poems;)

on May. 20 2010 at 7:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Aww thank u so much:)

on May. 20 2010 at 7:21 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u Vanity:) 

I appreciate your comment and I'm sry about your ex:( n i apologize for this snookums person...they r quite rude


Snookums said...
on May. 18 2010 at 7:50 am
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

can TOTALLY agree with it.

amazing poem.

keep up the work snook.


Saidah. GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 7:44 am
Saidah. GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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I can relate to thiss !

on May. 15 2010 at 1:28 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

I can't really say that I can relate to this because most of my friends have stayed the same, however it was still a great poem and therefore, I loved it. Great job! Keep writing!

on May. 12 2010 at 6:35 pm
chickadee23 SILVER, Boise, Idaho
6 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Who is wise? He that learns from everyone. Who is powerful? He that governs his passions. Who is rich? He that is content. Who is that? Nobody.
-Benjamin Franklin

 I am not trying to be rude or anything. I just think this poem is such a cliche. A lot of my friends really like it, so I have read it a couple times. I don't think it really is that powerful. I'm sorry. Maybe I should read some of your other work.

on May. 12 2010 at 4:40 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow i totatlly now how you feel!!! Great poem-i'm giving you a five!!! maybe you can check out some of mine when they come out in three weeks!!!

on May. 12 2010 at 10:40 am
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG"

I know exactly how that feel so with that being said I enjoyed this alot!

it is one of the best that I have seen on this certain topic :)

Keep it up !!!