You & Me

October 8, 2009
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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.





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krmernwazhere said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 8:04 pm
my fave poem so far on this site ;D
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:33 pm
Awww I'm soooo glad:) That is such a compliment;)
 
poemprincess14 said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 8:01 pm
that was very good i can relate a lot but maybe its for the better
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:33 pm
Thank ya:):)
 
Maritimer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 1:53 pm
A very nice piece. Your word choice was excellent and your prose flowed. I enjoyed reading this and have shown it to several of my friends, thank you for the delightful poem!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:34 pm
Well, Thank u so much:) It always pleasures me to know that someone enjoys my poetry:) I'm glad ur friends liked it also:)
 
bkcrider92 said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 10:19 am
LOVE it! Ik how u feel =(
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:35 pm
THANK U!!!!
 
princess4ever said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 7:34 am

i can really relate to this poem!!! love it

 

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:37 pm
Yay I'm so glad when pple can relate to my poetry:)
 
Shelby P. said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 12:18 pm
This is so good! I loved it! It has an amzing flow! You're very talented!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:47 pm

thank you:) I appreciate it very much

 

 
Nyrihaz said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:34 pm
Is an amazing poem. I can relate so much to it is not even funny, but that doesn't stop this from being amazingly good. And is true... is so sad when someone you knew so well, cared for so much, is now a stranger.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:53 pm
Thank u:) Aw I'm sorry that u've had to go through this also...it's the worst when someone so close becomes so distant. But thanks for ur comment i appreciate it greatly
 
PoeticJustice96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:54 am
This was a great poem I can really relate to it...great job!! Keep up the good work :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:32 pm

Thank u:)

It always makes me feel good to know my poem are relatable")

 
PoeticJustice96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:58 pm
You're welcome comments are always appreciated...so don't be afraid show me some love and I'll show some love back
 
his_baby_girl said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 11:41 am
this was a really good peom. it was strong and inspiring thanks! :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:01 pm

Thank you very much:)

n ur welcome...I not only write for me but for the reader also;)

 
his_baby_girl replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 11:06 am
thats amazing! how long have you been writing?
 
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