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You & Me
October 8, 2009
I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.
You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.
You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.
You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.
© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY
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LittleRedDeliriousPrince SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2016 at 10:34 am
Amazing!!!
King said...
on Apr. 13 2016 at 7:28 pm
Thank you for this. I loved it, simple and strong.
Kinsleighbrown said...
on Apr. 6 2016 at 10:33 am
This is soo touching! I once had a friend that had left my life. I can really relate to this poem and I really like it.
Amalia said...
on Mar. 30 2016 at 12:36 pm
I really like this poem, it has a lot of emotion and is nicely written and has a good rhythm. I like the metaphorical meaning of this poem.
jennabrinks BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2016 at 8:39 am
Awesome poem!
Richard_921 said...
on Mar. 24 2016 at 3:39 pm
sure i would love to read ur work c: ill leave u a comment too!
Richard_921 said...
on Mar. 24 2016 at 3:35 pm
this touched me in every way and i felt as tho i was watching my friendship with one my closest friend die over again in the process. Your wording is place so simply but yet so complicated that you say a lot with out saying
dpurdy said...
on Mar. 24 2016 at 2:17 pm
this is so beautful
dpurdy said...
on Mar. 24 2016 at 2:15 pm
tjis is absolutely beautul
IndigoWaltz PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 20 2016 at 5:29 pm
Check out my work it would mean the world to me.
IndigoWaltz PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 20 2016 at 5:28 pm
Its is nice but it could be better. I like the flow but it seems like you didn't put your all into it.
genessa.carney SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2016 at 12:26 pm
Mr.Squidy said...
on Jan. 15 2016 at 1:37 pm
This poem is one of my favorites because this reminded me of my experience with this.
Jakek6800 said...
on Jan. 15 2016 at 1:37 pm
Great poem, I like the stanza "You fell out of my life, Just like leaves in the fall. We were so very close, Now you're not here at all."
pandagirl10146 said...
on Jan. 15 2016 at 1:35 pm
This is beautiful i can relate to this i have had this happen to me meany times before. My favorite part of the poem is "you were full of live, now you are so cold, you personality has tarnished, when you once had a hart of gold.
afloridagirl PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 1 2016 at 4:33 pm
beautiful i love this
