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A two way mirror

October 7, 2009
By Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Don't give up and don't give in.. cause the info you give out,you can't take back in.


sunlight fades,
Shadows grow,
I cant hold out,
i know you know,
But, if i cant hold out,
what will i do,
i dont want to be here,
not with you,
So why did i come,
ill never know,
but how you make me feel,
I guess it shows,
the way you look at me,
the way i look at you,
why cant we just be together,
just one not two?
But the way you lead me on,
it shows in your eyes now,
the way you look through me,
i guess u never really knew me,
cause as i turn around,
and walk through that door,
you look through me, not at me,
But, thorugh me Once more.


The author's comments:
This is a piece i wrote during school.. i didnt submit it or anything i was just completely bored.. lol. and my friend Kathirine came up with the name for it. =)

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on Jan. 18 2011 at 5:27 pm
SierraWilkerson SILVER, Old Hickory, Tennessee
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amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Nov. 13 2009 at 2:44 pm
Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up and don't give in.. cause the info you give out,you can't take back in.

Lol idk just somethin ive learned to do.. its rare that i have complete silence.. so i got used to tuning people out i guess. lol

Oliviaw BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 7:26 pm
Oliviaw BRONZE, West Cola, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“Screwed down for life." ---Iowa Bob, The Hotel New Hampshire

Very creative. How can you guys write poems during school? I can not write something when one million people are talking. I have to have complete silence.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 11:11 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I like it...it has a vry nice flow...lol i write a lot of my poems during school too...oh n thanx for commenting on my poem...i appreciate it

on Oct. 21 2009 at 3:00 pm
Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up and don't give in.. cause the info you give out,you can't take back in.

thank you for the comment. I'll definitely check out your work.

-Ash

on Oct. 21 2009 at 1:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is really good :) i know the feeling. i like how you expressed that into your poem; i felt all the emotion. great job :) check out some of my newest work if you could, i would love your feedback.


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