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Feeling

September 28, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song


The author's comments:
I wrote this like last year and I just found it. But it's nice, it has a pretty ring to it I think... I don't know.

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on Aug. 23 2014 at 2:09 pm
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

love it!!! check out some of my work i'd love to get feedback from an amazing writer like you. I'm still learning and new- Kisses

on Apr. 21 2012 at 6:24 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Oh this is really good!! Great job keep up the great work!

EllieHeart said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:25 am
EllieHeart, Tempe, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pay no attention to what the critics say; no statue has ever been erected to a critic."










~Jean Sibelius

I loved this poem! Could really feel the emotion. Can you take a look at my poem Siren Lies and comment? Thanks!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 12:03 am
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
14 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

i seriously love this peom so much...<3

on Nov. 19 2011 at 5:48 pm
SocialPariah GOLD, Laurel, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dream is just a recycled memory.

Poem is great!! I loved it...but you forgot the cuplet at the end of a sonnet <3 loved it n e ways

BeingAnna GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 8:52 pm
BeingAnna GOLD, Montreal, Other
13 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty
-Marilyn Monroe

For some reason this made me want to cry. I can really connect with the emotion in this poem and I think it's soo touching. I feel like I wrote this, like you know exactly how I feel. It's amazing!

on Mar. 17 2011 at 8:21 pm
LoveDeep BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Success is what "YOU" make it.

Great poem, it made me wanna go grab a pen and paper.

on Feb. 6 2011 at 11:24 pm
lambthing BRONZE, Mason City, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"The best way to have honor is to be what you pretend to be." - Socrates

I love it; this is so simple, so pretty, and yes, it DOES have a lovely ring to it; excellent. (:

on Jan. 18 2011 at 5:32 pm
SierraWilkerson SILVER, Old Hickory, Tennessee
8 articles 3 photos 6 comments
i could feel your emotion in it.  i love it :)

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 6:10 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

didnt use that much of complex words

and thats exactly why i like it

hey try seeing my stuff

hope u like them too!!!


on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:21 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

i know! this is exacly what i've been going through this last week. this is exactly how they I've been feeling

on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:15 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

wow, this is very good. it covers the general idea of the emotion. its perfect. i really love it <3

on Sep. 27 2010 at 8:56 pm
taylor.nichole SILVER, Bakersfield, California
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I restore myself when I'm alone -Maralin Monroe
iv'e always been misrepresented. You know, I could dress in a clown costume and laugh with the happy people but they'd still say i'm a dark personality. - Tim Burton

this was realy good. you gots some talent.. relatable

on Jul. 27 2010 at 11:35 pm
Lester_34 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep your head held high becuz ppl wuld kill to c u fall

this is a great one!!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 7:14 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
134 articles 2 photos 86 comments
That does have a nice ring, and I can really relate to it.  Good job.

on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:58 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


cwayho BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 9:55 pm
cwayho BRONZE, Jericho, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"It's not about the years in your life. It's about the life in your years."

excellent pulse

the lines and expressions of your feelings, however, were somewhat simple, dull, and lacked poetic weight and effect


on May. 12 2010 at 10:43 am
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG"

This is nice ... And YES it does have a good flow to it

on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:59 pm
Nicole.Jones SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Move on to the future, don't look back. Just keep moving, see whats instored for you." Made it up myself....

this is really nice, it does have a nice flow to it.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:49 pm
lemonygirl97 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments
It moved my emotions not really no body. It's not physical it's emotional. That is the best way I can explain it.


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