Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Sep. 8 2009 at 12:10 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
according to my friends, my music teacher, and the one soloist competition I have been in I have a decent voice. I cant honestly tell you either way whether im good or not, im basically my greatest critic...Im a bit rough on this song because its mostly kind of screamo......and thats something i have to work on...but thanks for the comment glad u liked it and glad you think itd be something you would listen to =]

sadie912 said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:06 pm
luv this!sounds like something i would listen 2. can u sing tho??jw

on Sep. 4 2009 at 2:22 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i'm kinda disappointed other people got to this piece before me...because they have already said everything there is to say about this piece :) it is truly amazing, awesome, excellent, deep, heartfelt...and sooo much more <3 it is just so great, so sad and sooo touching. sorry my comment is so long, i just want you to know how awesome of a writer you seem to be!!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 8:32 am
SImplyMe* BRONZE, Pretoria, Wyoming
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i cant say more then what the other people said, but this piece is extraordinary, every word drips with emotion, its my biggest aspiration 2 be this good!

ACooke GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 7:09 am
ACooke GOLD, Ihiohh, New Jersey
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ah-mazing!!!! there was so much emotion behind the words and the capitol letters did a good job showing how the words meant more. good job, please consider reading my work

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:34 pm
WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW. It was really good, it has so much emotion behind it. WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW!!!!!!!

on Jul. 13 2009 at 5:33 pm
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
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I think therefore I am

wow thats a good song, its got so much emotion. good job!




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