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I sit with my feet up on the dashboard,
music bursting from the speakers in rhythmic little puffs,
windows rolled down just enough so I can dangle my left hand over the edge.

I can faintly hear the wind pecking at the cracks on the door,
sending the puddles of water on the ground into frantic ripples
and propelling crackled autumn leaves onto my car windshield.

I close my eyes and listen to the storm battering around me,
enjoying the balmy sensation of the car vents breathing hot air,
warming my skin despite the bitter cold outside.

For once I have nowhere to be, no deadlines to meet, no class to rush to,
and so I stay here just a little while longer while the world races on around me.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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kaciexrose said...
Apr. 26 at 8:15 pm:
I love short poems like this. Very moving. Maybe check out my writings?
 
Aniqa C. replied...
May 18 at 12:41 pm :
I feel the some way!It's nice and simple!
 
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LovelessWriter1090This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4 at 7:07 am:
It's so serene and peaceful! I love it.
 
Estelle18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 18 at 11:39 am :
Great job! If you have time read some of mine and comment. :) 
 
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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20 at 5:19 pm:
Fantastic Poem! Its nice, the calmness of the entire piece. Time rarely does take a breath, so thanks for capturing this moment. It really makes you reflect on all the peaceful times vs the over-energized ones. Thank you :)
 
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SummerBreeze7 said...
Jan. 29 at 3:45 pm:
Great poem, it was very well written. I would really appreciate it if you checked out my poem called Time. It is the first poem I've written for TeenInk and I would love if you left a reveiw.
 
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DreammerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 29 at 8:06 am:
great poem! id apreciate it if everyone could read mine and tell me what they think
 
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danyell017 said...
Jan. 7 at 8:29 pm:
This is amazing, inspiring and calming. You are a fantastic writer :)
 
hrf1434This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29 at 6:43 am :
I don't get it
 
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minicoolgirl12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 7:14 pm:
Love this poem! So tranqil.
 
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minicoolgirl12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 6:30 pm:
Love this!
 
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GirlWhoWroteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 6:13 pm:
This piece is so inspiring and calming! Annnnd... please check out my work?
 
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Mimi15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7 at 3:00 pm:
Check out my poem 'On our Own'
 
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bubblesrfunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 1:36 pm:
Wonderful! The imagery really makes it amazing!
 
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missingxD said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:13 pm:
i really like this. its awesome
 
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kairi.kaylynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 11:06 am:
This was short but really good. It has the perfect details to picture it in my head.
 
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JackieLoveJoyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 9:39 am:
Music, Fall. Favorite season, nowhere to be what more could a person possibly want? I could just picture it all great job.
 
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Wildflower30This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 1:08 am:
Autumn! Freedom! Music! Everything I love! :) Beautiful work. :)
 
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tweetiebruceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 9:54 pm:
This is brilliant, with some brilliant imagery! :) I could totally image that I was where you showed me. :D absolutely amazing
 
Art_TrashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 3:10 pm :
I definatly agree about how amazing the imagery is!
 
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RainbowChickenNugget said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 6:32 pm:

PLEASE DON'T READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE NEAREST FRIDAY BY THE ONE YOU LOVE. NOW YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS SO DON'T STOP.

THIS IS REALLY FREAKY!!!

1)say your name 10 times

2)say your mom's name 5 times

3)say your crush's name 3 times

4)paste this on 4 other posts. if you do this your crush will kiss you on the nearest friday. if you don't do this after reading this you will get bad luck

send this to 4 other post in 143 minutes when done pre... (more »)

 
raindance72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 7:05 pm :
Wow, I can't believe Teen Ink is now devolving into this. Be respectful! Post things that pertain to the article maybe?
 
to.hold.the.sunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 7:07 pm :
I couldn't agree more. Especially when it's as good as this.
 
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mattisonteeterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 5:53 pm:
I was feeling irritated all day and after I read this I felt so much calmer. It brought me back and gave me a feeling of peace.
 
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purplebutterfly said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 12:33 pm:
I loved this poem because it speaks out to what life should really be about instead of one big hassle. I enjoyed reading your poem...keep up the good work!
 
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KCaylaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 10:27 am:
I like this. It is something almost everyone does on their sparetime when they need to relax :D good job keep writing
 
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aurorairisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 9:58 am:

Great job! Wouldn't it be wonderful if you could do this all the time! There are to many things to do in a day! You capture this beautifuly!

Please check out some of my writing!

 
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SavannahMcKennaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 9:56 pm:
Nice job. i love that little freedom you get:) anyone should check my stuf fout if you get a chance....
 
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AshKat98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 5:12 pm:
So awesome! keep up the good work! <3
 
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LuVr GuRl said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 4:52 pm:
this is awesome!!! keep it going
 
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jrfuen1031 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:41 pm:
this is exactelly wat i think:) finally a teen thingXD
 
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kynedikatelynn25 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:22 pm:
this is exactly what i was thinking!!
 
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maraquette.kossThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 9:22 am:
This si great! if anyone could, please check out my work as well!
 
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GreenpawThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 12:36 am:
Wow this is great, can everyone check out my poem? I'd love some feedback :D.
 
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Narene_babyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 12:23 am:
Oh my gosh! This is great! I love how you can get a sence of you from reading this! And I don't even know you lol. I would greatly appriciate if you could go read a couple of my poems and give me some feedback. :D
 
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Duckie430This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 5:37 pm:
good poem with great imagery!
 
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aveawaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 9:41 pm:
GREAT JOB! i really can not write like you! I wish i could though.! would you mind checking out my work? help me out a bit?
 
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ArtistGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 7:58 pm:
BTW, come check out my poems please! I need some feedback.
 
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ArtistGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 7:56 pm:
An amazing piece of work! It's well written and has an air of peacefuless to it. I can almost feel what you're describing in your poem. I'd tell you to continue writting, but that would be a waste of time, because I have a feeling you'll be writting for a long time. :)
 
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luv2run2299This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 3:13 pm:
Amazing! Love it! KEEP WRITING!
 
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JaneyyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 5:19 pm:
This is such a beautiful poem! It really relaxed me :) 
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:24 pm:
sweet! I love the imagery. The vivid descriptions. Fantastic! Five stars!
 
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purplequeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 9:00 am:

Can you guys comment on mine!!??

If you do I will comment on yours.!!

 
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purplequeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 9:00 am:
awww... pretty
 
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RhythmAndRhyme said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 3:00 pm:
This sounds like a perfect place to be. You described it so wonderfully! I love this. Great job! 5/5!
 
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TAR11This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 8:16 am:
Nice work.  Please check out my poems From the Hilltop and Anonymous' Inferno. 
 
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dancer11srubinThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 3:48 am:
wow i felt like i heard and saw you're writing is was beautiful. nice job :)
 
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msoccerm345 said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 9:07 pm:
i like this. you are very good with your descriptions. it is a very beatiful poem that can teach people to enjoy the simple things in life. you are so talented:) keep it up
 
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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 5:00 pm:
nice & simple :)
 
lambertluver112This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 5:03 pm :
i like it... kind of beautiful in it's own way!(:
 
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