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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:15 am
skywitch BRONZE, Salem, Massachusetts
1 article 2 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
~ A person is smart. People are dumb, panicky, dangerous animals, and you know it.~ Agent K
Men In Black

That's great! I love how it's short! You get straight to the point!

ivyleef said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 9:28 pm
This is a very though provoking poem! Thanks for sharing. btw does anyone know how long it usually takes for your work to be posted?

Rabaya GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 5:11 pm
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
17 articles 0 photos 18 comments
WOW. Great poem! It's short but still it makes you sit and think. Look at my stuff if you get the chance.

KonyaB!!! GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:09 pm
KonyaB!!! GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 99 comments
Nice. Short with figurative language ( we learned that in school...yay!). Really good. :) The pic matched perfectly too.

Please Check our my work? I wrote a poem called best friends, and no one's really seen it. I love comments and stuff, so feel free to write eanything you like about my work. :)

KonyaB!!! GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:08 pm
KonyaB!!! GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 99 comments
Nice. Short with figurative language ( we learned that in school...yay!). Really good. :) The pic matched perfectly too.

Please Check our my work? I wrote a poem called best friends, and no one's really seen it. I love comments and stuff, so feel free to write eanything you like about my work. :)

Razor SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:09 pm
Razor SILVER, Everett, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Behind the hatred there lies a murderous desire for love"

This poem is short and on edge.

You really capture your emotions on how you feel about time.

Keep it up.

on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:59 pm
farrah sanders BRONZE, Bamberg, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
i like it... yes yes!!!

j-rye SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:26 am
j-rye SILVER, Toronto, Other
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace - Jimi Hendrix

short yet very insightful.

read my poetry if you will:)

on Jan. 7 2010 at 4:46 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Nice! simple and sweet. short and sincere. love it.

on Dec. 16 2009 at 11:41 pm
JessicaBuck GOLD, Fullerton, California
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I love this, good job

on Dec. 16 2009 at 8:45 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

short but rlly good!!! i like it~

chek out my work if u can

on Dec. 16 2009 at 7:27 pm
ItsCaroHere BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am not a has been, I am a will be

I love this. The way you described time, never thought of it that way.

on Dec. 16 2009 at 7:01 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

thats really kOoL. u put thingz in a different perspective of time. gr8 job

on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:54 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
17 articles 12 photos 87 comments
that's cute :]

check out my work!

jessica said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 11:44 am
did't get it at all. short article

on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:00 pm
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
32 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

Hm though it's short, I really do get it. Nice work.

on Nov. 24 2009 at 11:47 pm
Corinnee<3 BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday your dreams will come true." I sure hope mine do!!:)

Very creative! Congrats on getting your writing published!

mimi2.0 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 4:48 pm
mimi2.0 BRONZE, Fremont, California
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you really want it, then you gotta try for it. IF your hyped, the put it on the field"
"Marching band not only shows my love for music, it shows my love for everything around me."

this poem is great. not only is it short and simple but it gets straight to the pint. GOOD JOB and keep the writing alive.

~mimi

on Nov. 24 2009 at 4:33 pm
guitarmastercg27 SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This piece is so unbelievably great. It took me multiples times to get the true concept. Really good, amazing job

on Nov. 24 2009 at 3:14 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
17 articles 12 photos 87 comments
this is awesome because it's simple and somewhat nonchalant :) i think it's funny :D


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