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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on Oct. 29 2011 at 6:16 pm
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD, Providence, South Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Artists paint on canvas; Musicians paint on silence

Very true. I can feel the same way, and the feelings that you are expressing are great. Don't be afraid to write anything!

A_____ said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 2:09 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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This is incredible.  I know exactly how the narrator feels, how you could just rewind or fast forward time. (At least I think that's what the message is here.)  I love how it's so short and simple.  It makes it very poignant.

on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:58 am
faceityouredone SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"A mistake is simply another way of doing things."
~Katharine Graham

"For well you know that it's a fool who plays it cool."
~Paul McCartney

"Live Without Warning"
~Billie Joe Armstrong

"Life is but a Dream for the dead:
~Gerard Way

Wow! This is a great poem! Short and sweet, I like it! Great message too!

Lahari GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:40 am
Lahari GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That\\\\\\\'s why its called the present.\\\\\\\"
— Eleanor Roosevelt

\\\\\\\"When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and watch as the world wonders how you did it.\\\\\\\'

THis is amazing! Can you check out some of my work? I think youd like it! 

Heiwa BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 10:15 am
Heiwa BRONZE, Coventry, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have not failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work."
- Thomas Alva Edison (1847-1931)

I feel the same... it's a good poem but needs a little more work.

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on Oct. 24 2011 at 6:25 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I really like this, just because I like the message of it. I also think that it's very relatable. If anyone has time could they please check out my work?

on Oct. 7 2011 at 11:55 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

You did a great job. Keep it up! would you mind commenting and rating my work? Thanks!

on Oct. 7 2011 at 9:55 pm
I.believe BRONZE, Unalakleet, Alaska
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wow, i like this poem, its simple yet i still also feel the same sometimes.  its amazing!

on Sep. 15 2011 at 4:30 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

amazing i feel that way all the time

on Sep. 15 2011 at 7:39 am
AlexPaige BRONZE, Johannessburg, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Beneath this mask is more than just flesh. Beneath this mask is an idea Mr. Creedy and ideas are bulletproof."

In simple words, beautiful.

JSM1996 said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:20 pm
JSM1996, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm Done!"

This poem is great. I also would like "time" to be the name of a street and drive up and down it.

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on Aug. 24 2011 at 9:29 pm
Kgirl BRONZE, Hopewell Junction, New York
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this is exactly how i feel as i get ready to go off to college. this poem is amazing

 


on Aug. 24 2011 at 2:42 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Awesome. I love how simple it was. Can you guys check out mine. i need some feedback.

A_____ said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:44 am
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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The simplicity makes it great!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:39 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Love it! You captured so much meaning in FOUR lines; that's talent! Keep doing what you're doing, because it's perfect!

If anyone is bored and feels like giving feedback on a poem, can you check out mine? It's called "Rock Bottom" and is in the writing forum under poetry. Thanks!


on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:08 am
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
12 articles 2 photos 122 comments

You could have rambled on forever about sentimentality and everything else for endless verses. Instead you only asked for a few seconds of our time, and it is still as good.

Plus, please check out my poems "True Colors" and "Shoveled" if you get a chance and leave some feedback!


on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:51 am
purplequeen BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Guys check out my poems majestic emperor and all I need is you and others. Comment on it and I will comment on yours.

on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:50 am
purplequeen BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Great Job!!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 6:29 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Same here!!! :)))

on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:49 am
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Short and sweet. I enjoyed this. =)

Would anyone be willing to check out my poem? Please give me some comments/rates, I need more feedback! Thanks!





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