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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Anonymous_7 said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 11:55 pm
You did a great job. Keep it up! would you mind commenting and rating my work? Thanks!
 
I.believe said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 9:55 pm
wow, i like this poem, its simple yet i still also feel the same sometimes.  its amazing!
 
just-a-joy said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 4:30 pm
amazing i feel that way all the time
 
AlexPaige said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 7:39 am
In simple words, beautiful.
 
JSM1996 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:20 pm
This poem is great. I also would like "time" to be the name of a street and drive up and down it.
 
Kgirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 9:29 pm

this is exactly how i feel as i get ready to go off to college. this poem is amazing

 

 
CarolinaBoy23 said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 2:42 pm
Awesome. I love how simple it was. Can you guys check out mine. i need some feedback.
 
TotheSea said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:44 am
The simplicity makes it great!
 
JerseyGirl716 said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:39 pm

Love it! You captured so much meaning in FOUR lines; that's talent! Keep doing what you're doing, because it's perfect!

If anyone is bored and feels like giving feedback on a poem, can you check out mine? It's called "Rock Bottom" and is in the writing forum under poetry. Thanks!

 
Laura_Oliver said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 11:08 am

You could have rambled on forever about sentimentality and everything else for endless verses. Instead you only asked for a few seconds of our time, and it is still as good.

Plus, please check out my poems "True Colors" and "Shoveled" if you get a chance and leave some feedback!

 
purplequeen said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 8:51 am
Guys check out my poems majestic emperor and all I need is you and others. Comment on it and I will comment on yours.
 
purplequeen said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 8:50 am
Great Job!!
 
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 6:29 am
Same here!!! :)))
 
ElleNicole said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 10:49 am

Short and sweet. I enjoyed this. =)

Would anyone be willing to check out my poem? Please give me some comments/rates, I need more feedback! Thanks!

 
raidersrock08 said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 8:05 pm
that was! great
 
Aderes18 said...
May 26, 2011 at 12:11 pm
So true! :)
 
Cubster said...
May 6, 2011 at 9:35 pm
Yeah, you had a really good choice of words.
 
M.A.M. said...
May 6, 2011 at 9:49 am
You got your meaning stated in just one verse!  I wish I could do that.
 
alwaysadreamer said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 9:46 pm
that was brilliant in so few words! really talented!
 
ilyjb said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 7:44 pm
i love this it bright tears to my eyes and my brothers
 
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