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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on May. 21 2010 at 3:58 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
41 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

i'm so sorry for your loss,

the poem is the greatest poem i've read in a while, you have talent,

and your mother would be prund of you. all mother are no matter what we do


on May. 21 2010 at 1:01 pm
flipsters BRONZE, Benton Harbor, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not fair, it's how you take the cards that are dealt that matter."
"Everything will work out in the end, if it's not working out then it's not the end yet."
"Don't let the clouds of today hide the sunshine of tomorrow."

I'm so sorry for your loss. Writing is a great way to express feelings, and this was amazing. It shows so much emotion. The words you chose worked together perfectly, it gave  me such a vivid image. Thank you for writing. Definately keep it up. Great job :)

on May. 21 2010 at 11:42 am
Loveeyouu_x3 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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this is so amazing . it brought me to tears .

 

i still do have my mother but i never thought of it in that way and its just so upseting . im so sorry for your loss :'(


on May. 21 2010 at 9:26 am
float_away SILVER, Pheonix, Arizona
6 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love moderately, long love doth so." ~Shakespeare

I know how you feel but with my dad... i feel for ya :) beautiful writing, it's amazing

on May. 20 2010 at 6:48 am
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement" -TWLOHA
"Love is our weapon." -Christofer Drew
"I'ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!" -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

This is beautiful. I'm sorrry.

on May. 19 2010 at 5:15 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

I've read this so many times. Yet I can't stop reading it. Its so sad but beautiful and meaningful. Its put together really well. I loved it. Im sorry for your loss.

:')


on May. 18 2010 at 11:04 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

You've gotten a lot of comments on this without a doubt, yet I felt compelled to comment anyway. This is the kind of poem that can evoke emotion just by reading it. It was thoughtful and raw, and tied together nicely. <3 I'd appreciate it if you read/commented my work sometime. :)

on May. 17 2010 at 8:33 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
~~Isn't it funny how the most important things in life aren't things?~~

beautifully written and full of emotion. I loved it

on May. 13 2010 at 8:16 pm
princessariel SILVER, N/a, Maryland
5 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't this great? The salty sea air! The wind blowing in your face! *sigh* Perfect day to be at sea!
-Eric from The Little Mermaid

this was really beautiful. it reminded me of my friend's mom who recently passed away. i love how you evoked this emotion through your words :]

maRAWR GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 2:25 pm
maRAWR GOLD, Greeley, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"all you need is love" -the beatles =)

passionate and beautiful... very nice.  ive grown up with a single mother who has never been on the same page as me, and its interesting to ponder whether i would have been better off with no mother at all... i havent really found an answer yet, but it was great to hear your side of the story =)

on May. 4 2010 at 10:21 am
marijuanaismyname SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
memento vivere

my mother died a few years back and this poem really means something to me. thank you and you can read mine anytime

1layzie8 said...
on May. 3 2010 at 3:36 pm
this poem is so sad. but also so realistis. evey word creates a vivid image in my mind..

on May. 1 2010 at 10:43 am
Nervoussfacee BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Love is giving someone your heart and trusting them not to break it.

your writing is amazing! <3

on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:10 pm
PoetryKaiee BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I love you because I need you .... ( No ) ; I need you because I love you !"

This is really beautiful . 

Im sorry for your lost , keep writting your an amazing poet ( = 

            xoxox , Kaiee


on Apr. 30 2010 at 2:31 pm
omg , i read this and cryed in school , one of my moms friend died a couple days agoo , this is soo goood .

on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:08 pm
foolslikeme GOLD, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
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This is touching. Amazing piece that reminds me of myself. Well done.

on Apr. 29 2010 at 9:07 pm
Chicklet0903 GOLD, Watertown, Wisconsin
11 articles 21 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The funny thing about sacrifice is that sometimes, when you think you're losing something, you're actually just passing it on to someone else."

This is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. Truly inspiring.

Kara_333 said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 8:23 pm
Kara_333, Peabody, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lookin like a fool with ur pants on the ground

this is so beautiful. i cant imagine life without my mother. im so sorry for your loss.  i cried after reading this. you really have a gift with putting your feelings down on paper.

on Apr. 29 2010 at 8:00 pm
AinsleyChernek SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
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This touched me deep down.  Thank you for sharing.  

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on Apr. 29 2010 at 7:32 pm
lilybb BRONZE, Nyack, New York
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this is really impressive.. i'm sorry for your loss