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Daddy's Womb MAG
April 23, 2008
i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.
So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.
i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.
The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.
i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.
i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.
© Anonymous
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colinfisgay123 said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 8:42 am
I wish to make love to you when you are begging for it.
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 7:42 pm
I thought it was very good. The first couple of sentences drew me in! Great job!
cookiemonstergurl333 said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 7:06 pm
this poem is great! great rhythm throughout it! I wish i could write something that good! If this poem had rainbow sox, it would knock them right off! lol
L5L5 said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 11:16 am
Very strong. I enjoyed reading it. Makes me realize how much i miss my childhood.
Every sentence waas poweful..except maybe 4 the as "i saw the birdie.."
Every sentence waas poweful..except maybe 4 the as "i saw the birdie.."
MarinaNicole SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 10:12 pm
I like the rhythm that the rhyming forms-- really nice. But I'm a little confused on the concept of the poem. That's just me though, the poem was awesome. Loved it.
MatthewZ said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 8:03 pm
nice! look at my poem too plz? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/156195/Airplanes/ rate and comment plz! thanks a million!
Sr09 said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 3:11 pm
Nice Poem ;) Very creative!
CUTIC0314 said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 10:37 pm
i love this poem its so pretty.... whoever wrote this is a good poem writer
averagejoe said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 1:30 pm
i liked how you started flying, it was really imaginative.
forever casie said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 12:15 pm
I think this is very powerful great job.
Raven_Lilith_Jace GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 8:49 pm
i love it! i wish my stuff was HALF as good as this...
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on Dec. 27 2009 at 8:19 pm
That's really cool!
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on Dec. 27 2009 at 9:26 am
WOW This is amazing! So inspiring
fall_from_grace SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 10:19 pm
I love this story. PLEASE make it possible for us to read more!
fall_from_grace SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 10:13 pm
This is sooooo good! I want to read more!!!!!
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