Light This World

August 13, 2010
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look a bumble bee

one day you will see

it may sting

but in the end ill sing

i mean listen to what u read

at a slow speed

it is as i said and it's said as i say

that one day

this world will go black

like a kick to the sack

but people like us

will take a bus

to the center of fright

and all will see the sight

of our love and rhyme

going through all time

lighting the sky

till it's bright on high

we'll light the earth

more mothers will give birth

it wont be the end

it's light around the bend

it will be ok

no need for dismay

this life will go on

like a new born fawn

the story wont end

there's more time to spend

there's more to this life

than this ongoing strife

i made it through

so you can to

no need to run away

or keep back, at bay

take a stand

make a band

sing the song

like a resounding gong

drive out the dark

like a frightened lark

light this fragile rock

let no one mock

the person you are

and that your over the par

you will be great

tho all is at stake

the world is for you to take

so now the choice is for you to make

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talking-with-silence said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 2:45 pm
Cool, I like the mood and theme of the artical. Hah hah IMing :) they asked you to write them something???? AAnd you DID!!! I am impressed :) Yeah I know you could care less but hey- comentary. i was thinking about that sorta thing the otherday. Very true as always ;)
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 8:58 pm
Yeah I love rhyming. I can usually just belt it out if I need.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 5:36 pm
:D So your quick on your feet :) I can ryme all right. i don't like to use it too much in writng, normally I say more when I dont lol. :) But hey it works well for some ppl.
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 9:18 pm
I must agree. but as you see. I love to rhyme. I do it all the time. It says what I need. Even at some considerable speed.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 2:24 pm
That was cool. I hope the tool. Never goes to waste. In your every day haste. For don't lose the shimmer. That makes the work glimmer. :P :)
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 4:51 pm
aha see you got it.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 7:02 pm
Lol yeah :)
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