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Activation Code

February 19, 2013
By mkk10 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
mkk10 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -Les Brown


Summary:

It is the year 2381. Computers have taken over the world. But a rebellion is stirring against the computer dictatorship. This is the thrilling story about the leader of the rebellion and his quest to topple the empire.


Michael K.

Activation Code


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mkk10 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2013 at 8:09 pm
mkk10 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars." -Les Brown

Thank you. I understand where you are coming from and after going back and reading it again I agree with you. However, I can't edit the story without reposting it, so I might not fix it for a while but thanks for the feedback.

papersails said...
on Feb. 24 2013 at 8:02 pm
papersails, Muskego, Wisconsin
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The idea of a one person rebellion such as this is really good, and I like it overall, but you used way too many exclamation points. Majority of the lines used with them didn't need them at all and because of them, I stopped reading it halfway into Part Three. Edit that, and it'll be better.


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