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SUNBURNT!

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Kenzie A.
SUNBURNT!
Summary: After the year Ronnie's had with family and friendship problems. She falls for a guy that she's liked since sixth grade. But will her fears and personal issues come in between what they have or will it become what they HAD... Ronnie has to get over the fact she cant bring her father back and has to realize that college is just a year away. But when Ronnie's mom comes back into the picture with a new husband and a new family, Ronnie and her brother Jeremy have a huge choice to make...





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nemish23 said...
May 2, 2012 at 2:56 am:

the idea behind your story is great, i love it!

however, it does sound a little hastily written and some of the shorthand draws away from the writing itself. it's also a little difficult to tell who says what sometimes. the grammar needs a little work too (for examples, CAPITALS)

but apart from that it's good and i really liked the idea.

<3

 
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