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Through my Eyes

RachelNicole03
Through my Eyes
Summary: This story is about a teenager that goes through life struggles like any other teen in the world.



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rainbowwaffles said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 4:37 pm

I like it so far. :) The writing is good and the story's very strong. I think that these being the first three chapters, they are a little busy. Maybe you should also mention the setting, like what city Molly is in to explain all the drugs and violence. You forgot a few commas here and there, but it didn't make it impossible to read.

I'm looking forward to reading more! Update soon!

I have a realistic fiction novel, The Formation, if you want to check it out. Thanks :)

 

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