Through my Eyes

February 24, 2011
By RachelNicole03, springfield, Illinois
RachelNicole03, Springfield, Illinois
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Summary:

This story is about a teenager that goes through life struggles like any other teen in the world.


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on Mar. 3 2011 at 4:37 pm
rainbowwaffles BRONZE, Stony Brook, New York
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I like it so far. :) The writing is good and the story's very strong. I think that these being the first three chapters, they are a little busy. Maybe you should also mention the setting, like what city Molly is in to explain all the drugs and violence. You forgot a few commas here and there, but it didn't make it impossible to read.

I'm looking forward to reading more! Update soon!

I have a realistic fiction novel, The Formation, if you want to check it out. Thanks :)



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