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Unwilling Secrets

Linda J.
Unwilling Secrets
Summary: Lexie is lost in life. Moving from town to town she has never really discovered herself. Hiding from attention, and being a loner she doesn't mind her life. Until she meets someone who shows her just how special she is, and how dangerous her life really seems to be...

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Jurdibird said...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 8:44 pm
I'm trying to write as fast as possible. Sometimes I just get really distracted though which stinks :b i should have more up soon though!
half.note said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 12:14 am

To describe this:

Fantastic, terrific, amazing, and synonyms alike!

You have done a great job with your characters and plot. I can't wait to read more!

Keep up the good work. :D

Jurdibird replied...
Aug. 28, 2012 at 9:37 pm
thank you! also if you have any critics I would love to hear them aswell(:
half.note replied...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 10:50 am
There's not much for you to improve on. You have a great plot and excellent dialogue. If anything, pay more attention to sentence structure and punctuation. Try reading out loud to yourself--pausing at commas and stopping at periods-- to see how it sounds. If it sounds wrong, add punctuation where it will sound right. I hope this helps. :)  And please post more soon. I'm waiting...

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