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The Fate of Kiaronojo

Rebekah B.
The Fate of Kiaronojo
Summary: A beautiful princess named Helena marries a king from another country. When she comes with him to his kingdom, she is devastated by the darkness and terror around her.
However, when her courageous brother, Benton, hears about the plight of Kiaronojo, he sets forth on a quest to restore the kingdom to its natural beauty.

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CassandraD said...
Apr. 5, 2013 at 9:43 pm
I thought it was fun reading your story. The title pretty much compelled me to click and read it. But, I will say that I think the events in the story are a little too fast paced, so everything happens suddenly. It can sometimes be too confusing for the reader.  I read your note about writing your novel and you said that writing fantasy stories is something you haven't dealt with before. Well, this is good for starters. Just remember to keep a slow pace on the envents that are unravel... (more »)

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