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The Pack
Summary: Little Ebony Is In For A Big Surprise When She Comes Home. The Family is Devastated, Charles Worse, Cutting Ebony As He ran Away, Soon Arrested, She Wakes Up in The Hospital A Few Days Later. Her Friend, Kyle Whom Was a Year older Than Her Whisked Her And Her Twin Brother And Elder Sisters Away To A Teen Commune, Called The Pack. She Becomes the Best Fighter, Although Blind In One Eye, And A Great Destiny Awaits Her There...

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Anonymous said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 10:54 pm
This is fantastic! All I'm going to say is that the names are a little odd and that makes it a little hard to follow, and at some points you capitalize to many words. Other than that, this is great!

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