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What It Takes

October 7, 2013
By deafening-fan GOLD, Kutztown, Pennsylvania
deafening-fan GOLD, Kutztown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien


Thea Greene dreams of nothing but to get away from her humdrum, boring life in small town Cederwood, Pennsylvania. But when she meets one guy, it turns her entire world upside down. Now she has to realize if her dreams are really the limit, or are there other things in her life worth holding on to.

Caroline F.

What It Takes

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on Oct. 22 2013 at 9:35 pm
bigash123 BRONZE, Merritt Island, Florida
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world." -Ghandi

Hi! I read your story and i think you have real talent as far as writing goes, i just wanted to say a few things that hopefully will help you better your future pieces. you have a gift of pulling people in with your writing, not everyone has that. i would just suggest that you work on character development. i really liked josh, i just didnt know enough about him. i think its really important to develop your characters and not only that, but the relationship between them. keep writing, the more you do the better you'll get!!