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line break poems

October 3, 2013
By bradlee BRONZE, Oakpark, Michigan
bradlee BRONZE, Oakpark, Michigan
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I come from a beautiful women struggling to become someone successful…
I come from Hustle hospital…I come from six mile and Van Dyke…I come from a man trying to make it off the block ,I come from where my family loves me, I come from hot days wanting to get wet ,I come from a family where we stick together ..I come from the city that never sleeps, I come from where it takes money to make money, I come from struggling times ,I come from the motor city.., I come from the life that needs to be lived…….





Reflection

When I wrote my poems I decided to talk about things that happened in my life when I rewrote my poem I changed the line breaks and the stanzas… I wanted the readers to feel what I’m saying…I didn’t rhyme that much I just tried to make this poem interesting so someone will read it I begin to put events that happened in my like to persuade the readers thoughts….
Writing these poems has changed my point of view of poems… Poems can change your life the things the author/poet will say…writing these poems has helped me in a huge way I have became a poet over a little time so I just wanted to inform everyone how good I’ve became…….


The author's comments:
Writting has change me in a good way it has changed my way of thinking Ive became a poet now....

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