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my little world.

May 19, 2009
By Maxine SILVER, Hays, Kansas
Maxine SILVER, Hays, Kansas
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My little world
Diminished by love,
torn down by deceit,
my soul jumps at every sight.
i was burned by hatred, very wicked adn wrechted. the hold you have me in. a pain thats stinging, thet thought of no good-bye. how could you leave me alone. mildew comes, im still crying, the dream of you smelt, that reminiscing taste liveing on your lips. how perfectly unperfect you left me i remember, and i cant seem to forget you.. i dont think i will ever stop crying.

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on Nov. 14 2010 at 10:56 pm
silentvocal SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Oh my do i love this. this is stunning. I love your use of vocabulary-dude, i also like how it can be percieved in its own way, strung with such emotion spoke by so few words-a marvel :)