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"Winter" Feedback

October 22, 2008
By HiddenJulie GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
HiddenJulie GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Kaily D.’s poem “Winter” inspires the emotions of nature we all feel. I can picture myself standing next to Kaily starring at the tree branch piecing the cloudy sky. I, like Kaily, come from a commonly seen as always sunny home and I share her fascinations of a “sunless sky” lined with branches. Such simple shapes created into powerful symbols of passion. I wish to be trapped in such a wonderfully, artistic place and time. We all forget to breathe Kaily when we experience something beyond beauty. I thank you from my own poet’s soul for letting others see such a seen with out there eyes but with there minds. I hope to read more of your works in the future.

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