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My Ticket to a Different World

March 6, 2019
By Tokuley SILVER, Defiance, Ohio
Tokuley SILVER, Defiance, Ohio
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I will be writing about “My Ticket to a Different World” wrote by sulli2. I really like this article because it is about missing sports because of being in the hospital. I can relate to this article because I had appendicitis and missed football from the surgery and staying the night at the hospital. If I were writing this story I might have changed the title as it doesn’t talk about a ticket or a different world anywhere into the story. I maybe might have talked about the hospital more, the thing that really wanted this person to play the sport he loved. I agree with this article and it is well written.



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