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Love is like a rose. Sweet, but sharp as thorns.
Red as the blood spilled from all the battles
That those who have loved will forever mourn.
Love. Looked over, ignored, always trampled,
Cut down, only to grow back once again.
Layered as the feelings for each other,
Which grow and are forgotten now and then.
Feelings often foreign to him or her,
Ever hanging in delicate balance.
So pure, so rare, yet often misleading.
Underestimated in its absence,
Leaving people with broken hearts, bleeding.

Going crazy, in eternal anguish,
But always follows through when it's finished.




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ThePHSMuseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 1:32 pm:
To whoever views this: if you could please comment what you think, that would be greatly appreciated!! :)
 
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ThePHSMuseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19 at 5:13 pm:
To all who read this: If you could please comment what you think/rate this piece, that would be wonderful. :)
 
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doodlebug46526 said...
Feb. 19 at 2:57 pm:
I loved this!!! it describes love in such a good manner. The rose part was my favorite... Your a great writer keep it up :)
 
ThePHSMuseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 26 at 5:27 pm :
Thank you :)
 
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