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In the Valley

In the valley of the Kings where dreams
Are built and made to last forever
The dreams that tend to give you wings
When in the valley nothing can sever
For nothing can break a child from what insipires
The thoughts that run through a childs pure mind
Because they have a love of what they desire
Is what brings them together and helps them bind
Dreams that are planned for future success
Dreams that strenght the difficulties of time
The one that always tend to impress
As you cross through the valley of the youth
The enthusiasm of a dream is equal to the first loose tooth




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zoid123This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 23 at 12:36 pm:
I love it. its got such a deep thought process behind it. 
 
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WhiteSwan13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 22 at 6:36 pm:
Oh wow! I love this poem!!
 
DanielleB. replied...
Feb. 22 at 6:48 pm :
thank you WhiteSwan13
 
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AWriter101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20 at 8:36 pm:
Really Great!!!!! You are a great writer!!  
 
DanielleB. replied...
Feb. 22 at 7:07 pm :
thank you so much
 
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shayKittyFlcokaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 22 at 12:42 am:
this poem really makes u sit down and think. and even recall the old times/ the pic really matches too. great job!
 
DanielleB. replied...
Feb. 22 at 7:08 pm :
thank you for your comment
 
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