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In the Valley

In the valley of the Kings where dreams
Are built and made to last forever
The dreams that tend to give you wings
When in the valley nothing can sever
For nothing can break a child from what insipires
The thoughts that run through a childs pure mind
Because they have a love of what they desire
Is what brings them together and helps them bind
Dreams that are planned for future success
Dreams that strenght the difficulties of time
The one that always tend to impress
As you cross through the valley of the youth
The enthusiasm of a dream is equal to the first loose tooth



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zoid123 said...
Feb. 23, 2013 at 12:36 pm
I love it. its got such a deep thought process behind it. 
 
WhiteSwan13 said...
Feb. 22, 2013 at 6:36 pm
Oh wow! I love this poem!!
 
DanielleB. replied...
Feb. 22, 2013 at 6:48 pm
thank you WhiteSwan13
 
AWriter101 said...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 8:36 pm
Really Great!!!!! You are a great writer!!  
 
DanielleB. replied...
Feb. 22, 2013 at 7:07 pm
thank you so much
 
shayKittyFlcoka said...
Jan. 22, 2013 at 12:42 am
this poem really makes u sit down and think. and even recall the old times/ the pic really matches too. great job!
 
DanielleB. replied...
Feb. 22, 2013 at 7:08 pm
thank you for your comment
 
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