Do You See the Pain in My Eyes?

May 7, 2012
By Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.

Do you see the pain in my eyes?
Do you see what I go through?
I go through every day knowing that my own mother hates these eyes.
So full of pain, knowing no one want to help me through this.
I dread living each day
But I live through it knowing that my girl’s smile makes my day.
I turn to her for everything,
Love, help, pain, just everything.
I want all this to stop but it won’t.
It can’t be helped.
Nothing can, I guess it’s just the way life is.
Living in pain and going through all this.
Wanting to love and not finding it.
It shows only a bit.
This mask hides the pain,
With nothing to gain.
My tears are like rain.
It never stops but when it does,
My room is flooded and my eyes are dry.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Apr. 23 2013 at 1:08 pm
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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5 stars good job   

on Apr. 17 2013 at 1:35 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

it brought tears to my eyes 5 stars

on Oct. 12 2012 at 9:12 am
Logan_Elizabeth28 BRONZE, Willard, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Just Promise Me You'll Think Of Me Everytime You Look Up In The Sky And See A Star
"You're The Beautiful One, It's Society That's Ugly"
-Marilyn Monroe
"Rock, Paper, Scissors, Lizard, Spock!"
-The Big Bang Theory

i love this! :D

on Sep. 28 2012 at 9:18 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Wow! I loved it. You have a really heart-felt poem. :)


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