Allow my heart not to bewilder you

September 9, 2011
By Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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Do I deceive you dear sir?
Into thinking, I am far different from any other.
For surely I am but a troubled girl,
With nothing, nor a father or mother.

You must depart from me,
For if not, you are much rather a fool.
Please do not grow fond of me,
For this interrelationship will be nothing, but cruel.

Am I not crucial to you?
That you do not hear a word I am saying.
Just leave, go far away, please.
For this must surely be a game my mind is playing.

No human has ever loved me
So why should you be any different?
You are neither inferior nor superior
So please, start listening.

I will be of no help.
For I am nothing but merely a poor soul,
You are a man with an unspoken course
Who has came into this life with a striven goal.

So permit me not to be your diversion.
Let the grasp you have upon my heart, go.
For I will only slow your paste,
In this race of life, you should know.

If you truly believe, I am as a wonderful dream
With a rigid task, you have taken.
The please, dear sir,
Have a grip on reality and awaken.

Do not ask me why I must leave again.
For I have already spoken.
You are far more valuable than any gold
Moreover, my cost is nearly a token.

Allow my love not to bewilder you anymore.
Be as cheerful as a sung noel.
For I have loved you so much sir,
Therefore, here is a soft, gentle kiss of farewell.


The author's comments:
this poem i wrote was actually inspired by my favorite movie jane eyre. I hope you enjoy!

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on Apr. 14 2012 at 10:47 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

This is really good! I love the language!!!  Keep writing!

on Apr. 10 2012 at 9:09 pm
gb12197 PLATINUM, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
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"next time you feel like a failure, think about how you are alive, and you have the opportunity to be successful."

"i don't have an attitude, i have a personality you can't handle"

"i am weird"

i like how different and honest this poem is. it has so much meaning, and it is not like most love stories. this poem really made me think about things. you are so talented and your poems are all amazing, i hope you never stop writing, because you are honestly when of the best poets that i have ever come acrossed.

on Apr. 9 2012 at 4:34 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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oh, and I REALLY REALLY like the title!

on Apr. 9 2012 at 4:33 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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I really like this poem! It's so interesting, and I, like Kev-Girl, also like how it's a little "old-fashioned." It's definitely unique, and it really shows how talented you are! Definitely bookmarking this one! I'm also going to read Jane Eyre now XD

on Oct. 27 2011 at 2:14 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

aw this is amazing =D it seemed like there were a few places where the flow was off but the language more than made up for it, i loved it!

on Oct. 26 2011 at 5:39 pm
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that's the real me. I am a writer..." -TaylorBreanne

I really liked this! I liked the way you wrote it. You did a wonderful job! You're definatly talented. Keep writing!

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on Oct. 13 2011 at 8:25 pm
Kels95 BRONZE, Danville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Don't part with your illusions, for when you do, you may still exist, but you have ceased to live.
----Mark Twain

I must agree with the opinion above me. You are a very good poet and give your pieces quite a bit of heart. You asked me to read your work, I must say I'm glad I did. Thank you for your kind review of mine, and happy writing(:

on Oct. 1 2011 at 12:17 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

This is a very lovely poem! I love the language it was written in, and how its kinda old fashioned. The only grahmer mistake i noticed was "The please, dear sir,' Was probably supposed to be 'Then please, dear sir,' But I really enjoyed this! Good job!


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