My First

March 20, 2011
By russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."


The cold, hard statue glides straight down the hall
As it glides by, my hearts beats fast but dead
My eyes follow its graceful path and I fall
I remember that day and what was said

Your face was flawless and your laugh so great
But now it’s different when you pass me by
Our love or whatever it was called is hate
It turned out this was all a big dumb lie

Love reached out and grabbed my heart then crushed it
When you held me I felt safe and secure
Your touch was like a drug that I can’t quit
Even though it’s all gone I will endure



My love for you is stronger than ever


You’re my first love today and forever


The author's comments:
I wrote this for my english class after we read Romeo and Juliet.

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on Jun. 19 2011 at 5:16 am
GrapeGirl BRONZE, Brighton, Other
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yeh i know:)

on Jun. 18 2011 at 5:29 pm
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."

haha yeh same...it was kinda sad at the end...but not enough to really be sad...its just a STORY..:)

on Jun. 18 2011 at 1:59 pm
GrapeGirl BRONZE, Brighton, Other
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yeah, everyone was crying, I was like waaa??' <3

on Jun. 18 2011 at 10:15 am
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."

we watched it too!!! i thought the actting was bad but the guy was great!!<3

on Jun. 18 2011 at 6:17 am
GrapeGirl BRONZE, Brighton, Other
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yeah, I did that in mine. We did Shakespeare and we watched that Romeo and Juliet with Leonardo Dicaprio. I love Leonardo Dicaprio!!:Dk

on Jun. 17 2011 at 7:33 pm
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."

thanks! i wrote it for my english class...

on Jun. 17 2011 at 2:14 pm
GrapeGirl BRONZE, Brighton, Other
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aww that's so lovely!!:)




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