On the Rain and Sunshine

July 20, 2010
By KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet


The spring rain begins to fall
And washes the sun away.
The warm water dives to the ground,
Clings to leaves, wishing to stay.
As the sun fights for its rightful place
Melting away clouds of gray.
Soft breezes help chase them off
The clear, perfect skies of May.
Hearts leap, for summer is near
Far away from December sleighs.
Sunlight shines off the ocean,
Glimmers on the sand and lazed bay.
Green grass basks below,
And above, a rainbow.



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KatB14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:47 pm
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet

thank you. just tell me what you get from them. i also have 'chance the pain or remain scared' and 'stunning prospects' (not the official titles) in the forums.

Joyce_Cankar said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:43 pm
Joyce_Cankar, Montreal, Other
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I already am. :-)

KatB14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:42 pm
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet

thank you, would you mind looking at my other stuff?

Joyce_Cankar said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:40 pm
Joyce_Cankar, Montreal, Other
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Imaginative. Keep it up!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:43 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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 pretty! very well written and has great rhyme! could you please take a look at some of my work? anything except "secrets" please! thanks!

on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:56 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

That was so pretty! Very vivid imagery, very relatable, and great rhyming and flow.

KatB14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:25 pm
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet

Thank you both, the feed back is truely appreciated.

riley... GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:11 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

for starters, i am automatically in love with any poem starting with "on" something. haha

 

i agree with mrsneverjonas. brilliant imagery. great word usage that really painted a picture in my mind.


on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:20 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

oh my goodness, that was brilliant. the words brought insight n imagery to me :) great job!! that was perfect


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