The Gift

July 9, 2010
By liveforthemoment SILVER, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
liveforthemoment SILVER, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
we can only learn to love by loving - iris murdoch


she kissed him goodbye,
and gave him his heart,
she couldn't fix it,
it just fell apart.

his mind is still on,
the girl he once knew,
who cared for his heart,
and kept it brand new.

now that she's gone,
his soul still cries,
for the girl with the gift,
who saw through his eyes.



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on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:26 am
liveforthemoment SILVER, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
we can only learn to love by loving - iris murdoch

thanks alot :)

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:25 am
liveforthemoment SILVER, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
we can only learn to love by loving - iris murdoch

well its about a guy who broke up with a girl and tried moving on with a different girl but wasn't able to feel the same way with her. so she left him and his heart was still left broken with no one to fix it.

zaza said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 12:14 pm
well, i thought it was ok. i did not get the point tho. what was it about really.???

on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:34 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Your poem is so captivating! The flow and rhyme just blends so perfectly! Love it!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:22 am
liveforthemoment SILVER, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
we can only learn to love by loving - iris murdoch

thank you :) and i definitely will!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:16 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

ahh!! this is amazing :) so beautiful and so rhythmic! i love it. 5 stars all the way :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks! keep writing!! :)


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