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she kissed him goodbye,
and gave him his heart,
she couldn't fix it,
it just fell apart.

his mind is still on,
the girl he once knew,
who cared for his heart,
and kept it brand new.

now that she's gone,
his soul still cries,
for the girl with the gift,
who saw through his eyes.



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zaza said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 12:14 pm:
well, i thought it was ok. i did not get the point tho. what was it about really.???
 
liveforthemoment replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:25 am :
well its about a guy who broke up with a girl and tried moving on with a different girl but wasn't able to feel the same way with her. so she left him and his heart was still left broken with no one to fix it.
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 1:34 pm:
Your poem is so captivating! The flow and rhyme just blends so perfectly! Love it!
 
liveforthemoment replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:26 am :
thanks alot :)
 
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dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:16 am:
ahh!! this is amazing :) so beautiful and so rhythmic! i love it. 5 stars all the way :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks! keep writing!! :)
 
liveforthemoment replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:22 am :
thank you :) and i definitely will!
 
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