Mistake

November 12, 2009
By MeXiCaNsHoRtY BRONZE, East Chicago, Indiana
MeXiCaNsHoRtY BRONZE, East Chicago, Indiana
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The Mistake wasn't me
the mistake was you!
after all you put me thru
you expect me to get you back
sorry sweetie but that isn't going to come true.
but you know what its all good
because to me you are gone forever!


The author's comments:
this had inspired me because i am sick of guys doing girls wrong and girls doing guys wrong.

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on May. 19 2010 at 2:47 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

thank you!!! i feel how you do!!!

though i think it was written out of anger i think you should have used that anger and made it a more acommplished poem put more to and alil more time ya know? just sayin nothin personal other than that it was great!!


Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 7:33 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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