Hypothetical Situation

November 2, 2009
By BORREGO PLATINUM, Sacramento, California
BORREGO PLATINUM, Sacramento, California
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There is a maiden, with eyes of bronze
That take me to a place beyond.
She smiles, and mine heart it melts
Yet I doubt she has these feelings felt.

I wish I could explain myself more freely
Instead of through simple poetry.
But the beauty of eyes so precious
Freezeth my tongue and maketh it useless.

Thou mayest think it unfortunate
That this is how I communicate
But I have for thee one question
So thou seest my mind’s direction.

If I explained my feelings of affection
Using, not poetry, but language bare
Would she abandon this friend position
And consider herself my special pair?

The author's comments:
this is what I wrote when i realized we had something special!

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on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:38 pm
kristabel BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"To accomplish great things you must not only act but also dream. Not only plan but also believe."
also
"Life is like a photograph; we use the negatives to develop"

no only is this really cute but its deep and shows true talent. I really like your use of words




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