Eternal Love

October 18, 2009
By savedxbyxgrace93 BRONZE, Amarillo, Texas
savedxbyxgrace93 BRONZE, Amarillo, Texas
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Swept away by the selfish hands of death
A last goodbye flees from your trembling lips
Mute the world to hear your last painful breath
Tears start to fall as your lifeless hand slips
Dilatory days shift into the next
Never forgetting the love that you left
My feet stay idle, my mind simply vexed
Your swift departure, the worst kind of theft
Keeping my heart open to maintain joy
Though nothing will fill your place in my life
I try to move on, find things to enjoy
Even as this sorrow stings like a knife
No amount of time will make me forget
Love is forever, eternally set.


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on Dec. 6 2010 at 7:48 am
laurenswrite SILVER, Northville, Michigan
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sydni GOLD said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 12:40 am
sydni GOLD, Boca Raton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I’m going to paraphrase Thoreau here… rather than love, than money, than faith, than fame, than fairness… give me truth.” into the wild

this is seriously wonderful. this sounds like you were so passionate about whatever it was that inspired you! truly amazing.

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on May. 17 2010 at 8:35 am
smileyshia, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
live~laugh~love

wow absolutely amazing! :)

on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:35 pm
savedxbyxgrace93 BRONZE, Amarillo, Texas
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Thank you very much, and I'm sorry for your loss, may God bless you and your family.

on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:29 pm
savedxbyxgrace93 BRONZE, Amarillo, Texas
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Thank you so much :)

on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:28 pm
savedxbyxgrace93 BRONZE, Amarillo, Texas
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Thank you :)

on Dec. 8 2009 at 7:57 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

i love this

Aurora said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 12:43 pm
wonderfully written, saved by grace 93, it is very beautiful and inspiring :)

on Oct. 28 2009 at 9:53 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

this is so sad..it makes me think of my younger brother who left my family to be with god many year ago..wonderfully well written <3


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