Eternal Love

October 18, 2009
Swept away by the selfish hands of death
A last goodbye flees from your trembling lips
Mute the world to hear your last painful breath
Tears start to fall as your lifeless hand slips
Dilatory days shift into the next
Never forgetting the love that you left
My feet stay idle, my mind simply vexed
Your swift departure, the worst kind of theft
Keeping my heart open to maintain joy
Though nothing will fill your place in my life
I try to move on, find things to enjoy
Even as this sorrow stings like a knife
No amount of time will make me forget
Love is forever, eternally set.

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laurenswrite said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 7:48 am
hi asdfa  fead a
sydni said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 12:40 am
this is seriously wonderful. this sounds like you were so passionate about whatever it was that inspired you! truly amazing.
smileyshia said...
May 17, 2010 at 8:35 am
wow absolutely amazing! :)
writer24/7/365 said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 7:57 pm
i love this
savedxbyxgrace93 replied...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 9:28 pm
Thank you :)
Aurora said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:43 pm
wonderfully written, saved by grace 93, it is very beautiful and inspiring :)
savedxbyxgrace93 replied...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 9:29 pm
Thank you so much :)
Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 9:53 pm
this is so makes me think of my younger brother who left my family to be with god many year ago..wonderfully well written <3
savedxbyxgrace93 replied...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 9:35 pm
Thank you very much, and I'm sorry for your loss, may God bless you and your family.
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