You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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Kaity.. SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 10:03 am
Kaity.. SILVER, Elliston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
live your life to the fullest

I loved this pome...my brothers birthday is in september he died 6 years ago it is deff one on my fav pomes now ..thank you

samm987 said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:42 pm
Nice poem i like it

on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:05 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Ya ya ya lol I kno! but hey i wouldn't be me if i was all organized like u! I have to be unorganized to survive lol or atleast thats what i tell myself!;)

~Corrii~ said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:01 am
~Corrii~, Romeo, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
look before you fall

Ya u do lol Miss Unorganized! you are horrible with that lol so how's Dan?

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:57 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

busy! lol i gotta start using a planner or somethin! lol

~Corrii~ said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:55 am
~Corrii~, Romeo, Alaska
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
look before you fall

Awe this is a sweet but sad poem:( but anyways how r u? long time no hear!lol

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:26 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you:)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:25 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx for ur comment:) i checked some of ur stuff out n ur rly good!

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:26 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

yes...and i really like that one "To Care". its really good....

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

did u read my poems A Gift and To Care? They're two of my "Christian" poems that i thought you might like! :)

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:09 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

you are very welcome..lol

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:05 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thannx:) i appreciate ur opinion!

on Nov. 5 2009 at 2:59 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

i really like this poem. i totally agree with what it says. good job.

Shells SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 7:41 pm
Shells SILVER, Dixon, Wyoming
7 articles 6 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The dye has been cast. The decision has been made. I have stepped over the line. I won’t look back, let up, slow down, or back away. My past is redeemed, my present makes sense, my future secure. I’m done with low living, sight walking, small planning, colorless dreams, tamed visions, mundane talking, cheap living and dwarfed goals: I no longer need preeminence, prosperity, positions, promotions, or popularity. I don’t have to be right, first, tops, recognized, praised, regarded or rewarded. I now live by faith, lean on His presence, walk with patience, live by prayer and labor with power. My face is set, my goal is Heaven, my road is narrow, my way is rough, my companions are few, my Guide is reliable, my mission clear. I cannot be bought, compromised, detoured, lured away, turned back, deluded or delayed. I will not flinch in the face of sacrifice, hesitate in the presence of adversary, negotiate at the table of the enemy, ponder at the pool of popularity or meander in the maze of mediocrity. I won’t give up, shut up, let up, until I have stayed up, stored up, prayed up, paid up, and spoken up for the cause of Christ. I am a disciple of the lord Jesus Christ.” - African martyred for Christ.

This was beautifuly written! You did an amazing job. I can relate to this poem...

on Oct. 26 2009 at 12:41 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:) i appreciate it:)

mee-mee SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 4:23 pm
mee-mee SILVER, Orlando, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we all have dreams. but always remember with that dream comes a star. trust in yourself, believe in who you are. with nothing but confidence you will go far."
-mee-mee hoskins






quote written by:mee mee hoskins

im glad i did check out ur poems! good job. i like this one.

KaylaAnne GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 8:18 pm
KaylaAnne GOLD, North Platte, Nebraska
16 articles 0 photos 42 comments
I really like this piece and completely understand what you mean. Feel free to check out some of my own work too. : )

on Oct. 22 2009 at 2:53 pm
Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up and don't give in.. cause the info you give out,you can't take back in.

Wow. Dont let anyone say poems have to be long. This is a great poem and u used a lot of good literature. and yes it is very sad. Especially if it is someone you love or a family member or an ex.

-Ashlie

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 5:56 am
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

I really love this. Great work!

God bless,

...,

on Oct. 19 2009 at 7:18 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I LOVE THIS! It's so well written, I'm jealous! You just completely blew me away with the adjectives, the rhythm and the rhymes. I am in awe. But yeah, that is sad, when that happens to a friend, or anybody, really.




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