You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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Mandilee GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 9:01 pm
Mandilee GOLD, Sierra Madre, California
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Wow! I can so relate in many different situations! I love this, so simple yet such a message. And it makes you think. Wonderful! Keep writing!

on Dec. 8 2009 at 12:45 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much:)

I'm glad you enjoyed it;)

And I appreciate your opinion:))

Diana12 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 7:14 pm
Diana12 BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
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Your writing speaks your mind! I enjoyed reading your poem its amazing and very touchful. Keep it up, better things will come to you!

on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:30 pm
Volleygirl25 SILVER, Pisgah, Alabama
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Watch your thoughts, for they become words. Watch your words, for they become actions. Watch your actions, for they become habits. Watch your habits, for they become character. Watch your character, for it becomes your destiny.-- Unknown

Oh my i love this! i so can relate and i absolutely love it. The words flow together beautifully.

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 4:42 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

This is amazing i drew me in just with the first line!! keep it up!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:43 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

WOW~~ i love this poem and i caan totally relate!! i have a poem called "Dont Blink" i culd use feed back~

ur poem was AWESOME!!! keep writting

on Nov. 17 2009 at 1:51 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you!

I alway like known someone can relate to my poems! :)

I checked out some of ur poems ;) n they are rly nice:)

gabigal SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 6:06 pm
gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
6 articles 12 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything has beauty in it, you just have to see it"

i love this..it resembles my life..im the same..he's not...awesomness!!!!

on Nov. 16 2009 at 9:23 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:)

I'm glad you enjoyed;)

I like ur stuff also:)

kpf1991 said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:48 am
kpf1991, East Hanover, New Jersey
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How this is amazing! it was a great expression of change and maturity within life's journey. Yet, you also showed the constant things in life which tied everything together! AMAZING!

on Nov. 14 2009 at 1:12 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank You! ;)

Ya I wonder what they looking for sometimes lol all of my fav poems on her aren't in the magazine! lol

Ur poems and stories are really great too:)

on Nov. 14 2009 at 1:07 pm
Robkingett PLATINUM, Tallahassee, Florida
24 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was little they called me a liar, but now I'm grown up, they call me a writer.

OMG! this poem is the best! wow! it's a shame it didn't make i in the mgizine. i love the first stanza the best.

on Nov. 10 2009 at 11:45 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you:)

Change either makes ya or breaks ya

on Nov. 9 2009 at 9:33 pm
CaseyLeigh PLATINUM, Moraga, California
31 articles 6 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
My wish, for you, is that this life becomes all that you want it to.

This poem is amazing. I don't think there's a person who hasn't seen such change, been through such an experience.

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:51 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx for ur comment i appreciate it:)

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:50 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanks:):)

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:49 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe I'm sorry :(

I'm glad my poem could touch ur heart.

I write for others as much as I write for myself.

Marie92 said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 9:32 am
Marie92, Levelland, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When one door opens, another one closes."

Aww... my friends been through this. Its a great poem.

on Nov. 8 2009 at 8:46 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i liked this poem. it was really good

Kaity.. SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 10:03 am
Kaity.. SILVER, Elliston, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
live your life to the fullest

I loved this pome...my brothers birthday is in september he died 6 years ago it is deff one on my fav pomes now ..thank you


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