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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:08 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you vry much:D

on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow I never thought of this poem that way but i guess that works too:) thanx for ur comment:))

on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:05 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

this poem rly is about a friendship not a bf/gf relationship...I'm glad u enjoyed it:) Thanx

on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:03 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much! This poem is prolly one of my favs because it rly wasn't forced at all it came to me vry naturally :)

on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:20 pm
11fresemily BRONZE, Kenton, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Let The Fear Of Striking Out Keep You From Playing The Game"

I Love this soo much <3 its so very true.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:59 pm
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

this is amzing i get it. it remeinds me of likin a guy and ahving a connectiion then seeing him again and nott.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:40 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

thx. ive submitted tons of poetry

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:07 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe thank u:)

It thrills me to kno u can relate to the poem:)

I'll check out ur work once u submit some;)

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) I love feedback n expesially wen it's good feedback n ofcoarse i"ll def check out ur work;)

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:05 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx I'm glad ;D

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:04 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow thank you :) what a comliment

I'll def check out some of ur work when I have the chance:) n thank u again!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:02 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u so much:)

Sadly it happens too often...

on Feb. 23 2010 at 8:09 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

This has happened to me befofe but not a break up. Never had one of those. I like your poem alot but I'm not so sure it's a sonnet , there supposed to have 14 lines you have 8. but it is a lovely poem. :)

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on Feb. 22 2010 at 4:25 pm
xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is not the length of life but the depth of life"- Ralph Waldo Emerson

This is very beautiful! I can relate. I love the flow of it-it doesn't sound forced at all.

booboo360 said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 2:33 pm
omg i luv ur poems!!!!!! they are so great . i feel like ......... i feel like i no u. ur so great. i relate so much to this poem i am 14 so im going through the break-up stages and this is my new fav

on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:56 am
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
54 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

i really liked this...it was really good. i loved the story it told... you can kinda relate it to summer love...i loved it. u should see if you like my stuff

on Feb. 16 2010 at 8:52 am
CheyCheyLLama BRONZE, Sebring, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments
This piece, I can really relate to. I love it(:

on Feb. 12 2010 at 10:04 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Wow! I love this! It's simplicity makes it so beautiful. This is definitely a 5 out of 5. Please stop by and check out my work. I would highly appreciate it. Thanks and thanks again for this amazing poem! Keep writing! I'd love to hear more by you.

on Feb. 10 2010 at 3:23 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

wow this is a great poem. it has happened to me quite a few times. you can relate very well to this. you are an excellent writer

on Feb. 6 2010 at 8:57 am
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
21 articles 0 photos 73 comments
This is absolutely amazing! That happened to me a couple of times. =)


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