My CoLoUrFuL dEaTh

September 17, 2009
By brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better


I've fallen off the beaten Path,
Traveled through the Woods,
With my black Sash,
I fled through the Forest,
In my best white Dress.

I ran through the Green,
My Silver shoes gleamed,
I jumped off the dirt,
In my favorite Gray shirt.

I danced throughthe Leaves,
My pink Ribbons falling off my sleeves,
I hopped off the Road,
Into the Woods I strode.

I sprinted into the Sea,
Dying Automaticly.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem in Class,
I wrote poem because "I've fallen off the beaten path" came to my mind it InSpireD me

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PickledTacos said...
on Jul. 10 2016 at 10:41 pm
PickledTacos,
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I love the ending

on Mar. 23 2013 at 1:24 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

The last line: Epic.. This poem appear simply written but when one looks into the meaning of each word each syllable each letter everything becomes so clear, the message is deep.

on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:46 pm
thank you sooooo much

on Oct. 4 2009 at 1:43 pm
thestoryofme163 SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
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this reminds me of some of the stuff we've been talking about in my english class about the loss of innocence. cool :)

on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:11 pm
\\^/RageCage12\\^/ GOLD, La Porte, Indiana
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Very nice

I like how well it flows and the way the rhythm follows evenly.

Very good work

on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:26 pm
LittleAngel*12 SILVER, New Paris, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

nice job, like this a lot

I think it describes a lot of us....

on Sep. 26 2009 at 10:35 am
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
18 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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