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I've fallen off the beaten Path,
Traveled through the Woods,
With my black Sash,
I fled through the Forest,
In my best white Dress.

I ran through the Green,
My Silver shoes gleamed,
I jumped off the dirt,
In my favorite Gray shirt.

I danced throughthe Leaves,
My pink Ribbons falling off my sleeves,
I hopped off the Road,
Into the Woods I strode.

I sprinted into the Sea,
Dying Automaticly.




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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23, 2013 at 1:24 pm:
The last line: Epic.. This poem appear simply written but when one looks into the meaning of each word each syllable each letter everything becomes so clear, the message is deep.
 
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thestoryofme163 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 1:43 pm:
this reminds me of some of the stuff we've been talking about in my english class about the loss of innocence. cool :)
 
colourfuldeather replied...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 3:46 pm :
thank you sooooo much
 
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DJ F. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 10:11 pm:
Very nice
I like how well it flows and the way the rhythm follows evenly.
Very good work
 
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Katelyn M. said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 6:26 pm:
nice job, like this a lot
I think it describes a lot of us....
 
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inloveconfused said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 10:35 am:
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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