These games

By hannahbee7, Boca Raton, FL

I think we're all just crazy
stuck playing these tough games
Alive with fear and hatred
and living off of pain

We run and run in ciricles
no one breaking out
we haven't moved a meter
our hearts are fraught with doubt

We run until we're broken
and know we can't survive
our weakend hearts still beating
are keeping us alive

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EllieHeart said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 5:47 pm:

Really loved this! Would you mind checking out my poem Siren Lies? I'd really love your feedback! Thanks!

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Batmanbabe said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 10:18 pm:

I really liked this(: it's emotion-filled and honest!

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arharrison said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 2:16 pm:

I loved...!

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High-above-de-world said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 7:29 pm:

its good but its not a sonnet a sonnet is 14 lines and to make it a sonnet u add a stanza of 2 lines to ur other 3 stanzas of 4 lines. Thats the english sonnet. There is also the italian sonnet and I do believe it is a sonnet divided into 2 lines per stanza. I can't remember then a regular sonnet is 14 lines :) I rly like where u are going with this poem

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ThebitchfromDenmark said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:10 am:

Love it, Mate.

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