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Since the day we met I knew me life changed,

You made me happy everyday we spent.

My emotions rearranged and highly

Ranked. It made me realize what life meant.

I spend most of my days thinking of you

And the love and joy you have brought to me.

Our love is so strong it has become true,

When I am I your presence I feel free.

The day I saw you it felt O so right

When I was around you I turn ed red.

My heart would skip a beat with you in sight,

I listen to each and every word said.

You said to me you would leave me never

Now lets live life together for ever.



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KaykayMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 8 at 2:24 am:
a very sweet poem!
 
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RokkoZeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 17, 2013 at 10:25 pm:
Every poem doesn't have to be a Shakespearean masterpiece with heavy metaphors and fancy vocabulary. Sometimes simple is better. This was a simplistic poem with a lot of emotion and a powerful message. 5/5 in my opinion, great job! Keep writing! :)
 
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VickyNickyKitty said...
Dec. 21, 2012 at 11:05 pm:
Pretty poem.
 
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DaleTheWhale said...
May 15, 2012 at 10:54 am:
It's good, but too simple.
 
DreamingOfNirvana replied...
Feb. 2, 2013 at 9:52 pm :
That about sums it up, yeah.
 
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MiaUnwriten said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 2:55 pm:
Amazing poem, i love it
 
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D-wreck said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 12:26 pm:
I like your poem, but the 2nd to last line it looks like you switched "never" to the end that way it would rhyme, I also think you should work on your grammar.
 
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horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 9:50 pm:
This poem is really awesome i loved everything about it
 
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Ale d.17 said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 2:42 pm:
is a nice poem
 
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AlwaysDanceInTheRain said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 10:27 am:
This poem was sweet and nice but it seemed really simple and juvenile. Not a lot of substance or creativity
 
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yessica said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:51 am:
i really like the poem
 
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MaryGabrielle said...
May 21, 2011 at 9:47 am:
I love it :) check out my poem Green-Eyed monster when you get a chance! I wrote it about a similar topic
 
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cutp9396 said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 7:20 am:
Im Loving The Vibe . Your Poetry Is Good :)
 
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Shaunice B. said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:38 am:
I liked how the poem came together and you reminded me of a past relationship. I love this poem, and my class thought it was ok
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 2:58 pm:
Vry nice... I like your choice of words...it makes a nice flow...you should check out some of my poems
 
-kmb. replied...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 4:20 pm :
Tagged as my favorite(: Beautimous!
 
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