Love Sonnet

June 1, 2009
By Alexandra Sarzyniak BRONZE, La Mesa, California
Alexandra Sarzyniak BRONZE, La Mesa, California
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Since the day we met I knew me life changed,

You made me happy everyday we spent.

My emotions rearranged and highly

Ranked. It made me realize what life meant.

I spend most of my days thinking of you

And the love and joy you have brought to me.

Our love is so strong it has become true,

When I am I your presence I feel free.

The day I saw you it felt O so right

When I was around you I turn ed red.

My heart would skip a beat with you in sight,

I listen to each and every word said.

You said to me you would leave me never

Now lets live life together for ever.


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Gayboy said...
on Jan. 11 2017 at 6:18 am
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LuluE said...
on Mar. 1 2016 at 8:40 am
Can i pls use this....

on Jan. 22 2016 at 2:29 pm
AwesomeWriter SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What light is to the eyes - what air is to the lungs - what love is to the heart, liberty is to the soul of man.
Robert Green Ingersoll

Awesome!!!!!! Keep writing from the heart!!!! It shows through and it's extremely original as well!

_msj23 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 4:29 pm
_msj23, Daly City, California
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nice poem!

on Jul. 8 2014 at 2:24 am
kayleigh.marie BRONZE, Kentwood, Louisiana
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a very sweet poem!

on Sep. 17 2013 at 10:25 pm
rokkotothezee GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I never sleep, 'cause sleep is the cousin of death

Every poem doesn't have to be a Shakespearean masterpiece with heavy metaphors and fancy vocabulary. Sometimes simple is better. This was a simplistic poem with a lot of emotion and a powerful message. 5/5 in my opinion, great job! Keep writing! :)

on Feb. 2 2013 at 9:52 pm
WinterGreer SILVER, Wasilla, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
dance like no one's watching/ love like you've never been hurt/ sing like no one's listening/ live like heaven is on earth

That about sums it up, yeah.

on Dec. 21 2012 at 11:05 pm
VickyNickyKitty SILVER, Lincolnton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Praise him with the tambourine and dancing; praise him with strings and flutes!
-Psalm 150:4

Pretty poem.

on May. 15 2012 at 10:54 am
DaleTheWhale BRONZE, Tipp City, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You weren't put on this earth to be ordinary."

It's good, but too simple.

on Mar. 10 2012 at 2:55 pm
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

Amazing poem, i love it

D-wreck BRONZE said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 12:26 pm
D-wreck BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
As if you could kill time without injuring eternity- Henry David Thoreau

I like your poem, but the 2nd to last line it looks like you switched "never" to the end that way it would rhyme, I also think you should work on your grammar.

on Oct. 30 2011 at 9:50 pm
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart- I've left it with you."
-Stephenie Meyer (Eclipse (Twilight #3))
"Either write something worth reading or do something wor
th writing."
-Benjamin Franklin
"A dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest."
-Johnny Depp

This poem is really awesome i loved everything about it

Ale d.17 said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 2:42 pm
is a nice poem

on Sep. 16 2011 at 10:27 am
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason.

This poem was sweet and nice but it seemed really simple and juvenile. Not a lot of substance or creativity

yessica said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:51 am
i really like the poem

on May. 21 2011 at 9:47 am
MaryGabrielle BRONZE, Leonardo, New Jersey
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I love it :) check out my poem Green-Eyed monster when you get a chance! I wrote it about a similar topic

_Asap BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 7:20 am
_Asap BRONZE, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
" The Only Thing That Comes To A Sleeping Man Is Dreams " - Tupac Shakur

Im Loving The Vibe . Your Poetry Is Good :)

on Jan. 29 2011 at 4:20 pm
-143_ily. BRONZE, Over The Rainbow,Where The Skittles Are, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
~*You Know You're In Love When You Can't Fall Asleep Because Reality Is Finally Better Than Your Dreams!*~ <3

~If U Want Me 2 Fall For U..... U Gotta Give Me Sumthin' Worth Trippin' Ova! ~

Tagged as my favorite(: Beautimous!

nene937 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:38 am
nene937 BRONZE, Dayton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
When you love something no matter how much it hurts sometimes you have to let it go!!!!!!!!!

I liked how the poem came together and you reminded me of a past relationship. I love this poem, and my class thought it was ok

on Oct. 23 2009 at 2:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Vry nice... I like your choice of words...it makes a nice flow...you should check out some of my poems


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