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Bang Goes the Gun

The gun went bang!
Taste the bullets tang!
Boom! it went again.
im beginning to drown in sin.
Click! went the hammer,
as the bullets slam her.
Tink! went the trigger,
as the metal goes in her.
Zoom! goes the tip,
as i empty the clip
Bang!
Boom!
Click!
Tink!
Zoom!
Plop.
As you drop.





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Proof said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 12:28 pm
this is Nice
 
Two-ply said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:31 pm

This is really good, and very creepy, a great halloween song! Keep writing!

P.S. Check out some of my work?

 
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