Bang Goes the Gun

September 29, 2011
By Zaduku BRONZE, Logan, Ohio
Zaduku BRONZE, Logan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Through death, may we know true acceptance." Stormy Doan

The gun went bang!
Taste the bullets tang!
Boom! it went again.
im beginning to drown in sin.
Click! went the hammer,
as the bullets slam her.
Tink! went the trigger,
as the metal goes in her.
Zoom! goes the tip,
as i empty the clip
As you drop.

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Proof SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:28 pm
Proof SILVER, Silver Spring, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
The world is yours you just have to take it

this is Nice

Two-ply SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2011 at 4:31 pm
Two-ply SILVER, Black Mountain, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Do one thing each day that scares you" -Eleanor Roosevelt

This is really good, and very creepy, a great halloween song! Keep writing!

P.S. Check out some of my work?

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