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17 Love

September 1, 2009
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)


[1st Verse]
Every day
& every night
everything just works out right
cuz face it
baby you and me
were ment to be

[Chorus]
You & me

for-eber & eber
we'll stay together
'cuz this'll work
i'm sure
your all i've waited for
(& soo much more)

[2nd Verse]
17 days
17 nights
everythings
still going right
& we're stronger than ever
together

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Foeber & eber & eber
together
you & me
we'll be
i'n love


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on Sep. 15 2017 at 1:08 pm
Breezette DIAMOND, Uniontown, Arkansas
84 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every Time I even think of you, all those bad memories just fade away, 'cause your smile's enough, you're enough...

Good job, very impressive. I actually write songs, on the piano,Ukulele, Violin, and the Keybard. You should check out my stuff too!

on Jun. 1 2011 at 4:44 pm
SquirrelGirl2 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
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:) aww... this is cute

on Apr. 18 2011 at 12:39 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

I like it (: maybe check out some of my stuff?

normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 11:51 am
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

<3 very

on Mar. 5 2011 at 6:49 am
CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
81 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best things in life are unseen, that's why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream.
What doesn't kill you, only makes you stronger.

THIS IS CUTEEE

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:34 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

thanks it has no music but all my songs are like that.I have about a small note book of them.

on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:33 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thanks! It's just a hobby

trblue GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 12:03 pm
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

great song i give you props on just writting one.

on Dec. 20 2009 at 10:03 pm
Katiebug98 SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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that was amazing!!! great work, really. you have talent!

on Nov. 10 2009 at 3:56 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

yeah thanks I wrote it while I was dating my now ex. It described how I felt towards him.

on Nov. 6 2009 at 11:10 am
CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
14 articles 11 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to take life less seriously to get where you want to be."

Awww. This is real sweet. =] A perfect depiction of "young love." =]

on Sep. 24 2009 at 3:48 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thanks when I add music to it, it will be longer there will be alot of improv into it. lolZ butI haven quite got to that yet i'll keep you posted.

on Sep. 24 2009 at 3:47 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Sure things thanks for the feed back.

chychy said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 10:56 pm
wow i loved it but then it ended and i wanted more i think you could add more i mean wwwooowww

on Sep. 23 2009 at 8:47 pm
LikeToPlayFish GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
13 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We all fake smiles, just the ones who are true to themselves seem sad."-Niq.

i like it i really do you should check out my work some time i made a song

on Sep. 21 2009 at 3:40 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you I'm glad that i'm finally getting ideas on stuff to work on. I'll work on it with my future songs.

on Sep. 21 2009 at 3:33 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

Beautiful! But you should make it longer.


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