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Rain Storm

Drip, drip, drop
Are my tears fallin' down.
Drip, drip, drop
Is the sound of my cryin'.
Drip, drip, drop
I'm tryin' not to frown.
Drip, drip, drop
I'm dyin' here without you!

The storm is growing stronger,
It's makin' me so sad.
This time it's going longer,
Why did you have to go?

The lightning strikes into my soul,
and cracks my heart in half.
My mind is racing, like the lightning,
The thunder takes away my laugh.

I'm cryin' out to you.
Why did you need to go?
Please know that I love you.
I wish you would come home!

The lightning strikes into my soul,
and cracks my heart in half.
My mind is racing, like the lightning,
The thunder takes away my laugh.

I need you,
Do you need me?
I miss you,
Remember the fun times?
Can you see,
This message I'm sending?
Please come back,
You're headed the wrong way!

The lightning strikes into my soul,
and cracks my heart in half.
My mind is racing, like the lightning,
The thunder takes away my laugh.

The lightning is fading,
The thunder is rolling away.
Now my crying is quiet,
Like this rain storm, above me.

Drip, drip, drop
Are my tears fallin' down.
Drip, drip, drop
Is the sound of my cryin'.
Drip, drip, drop . . .




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Alex Kearns said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 7:20 pm:
Why would I post my own?  I was asked to rate this and comment on it to make it better.
 
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Alex Kearns said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 6:54 pm:

Beautiful.  But, I am back to hark on your work again :)

What type of poetry is this?  Just so I can get the structure down.

I imagine this is a kinda slow going song?  With one of those depressing keys?

I noticed that you don't like the "ing" endings and resorted to the "in'" ending.  Is this to put a little culture into this piece?  Or just a habit?

Now that you have had a rough draft, try to see how you can expand on it.  You can fi... (more »)

 
Mark replied...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 8:54 am :
Alex - you are a funny guy!  Here's a challenge...  Perhaps post one of your own?  Just a thought..  ;-)
 
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Levier said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 5:14 pm:
Beautifully written by RoseOzera.  Both the song lyrics and title.  Very nice!
 
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