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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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lea_f910 said...
on May. 30 at 12:11 am
lea_f910, Honesdale, Pennsylvania
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this was a beautiful poem and it would be an amazing song

on Mar. 9 at 9:39 am
KatelynnNicole, Middleburg, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
'Never love anyone who treats you like your ordinary.'






















-Oscar Wilde

I agree with @Armando, these lyrics really reached out, and it would be a great song.

_Armando said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:37 pm
_Armando, Sacramento, California
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Yo this hit me it was very good and you should make it into a actual song

on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:32 pm
claudia-padilla, Sacramento, California
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I like the emotion in your song. I think this is very powerful.

on Dec. 13 2019 at 11:52 am
Goku_Nativeson, Ogema, Minnesota
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Tour very good

jmeeks said...
on Dec. 3 2019 at 2:41 pm
jmeeks, North Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
This is like the calm after the storm, everything has settled and even though it left destruction in it's wake, you know the worst is over.

this is very powerful, you are a talented writer.

on Sep. 29 2019 at 8:18 pm
dashbabylittle, Fort Mcmurray, Alberta
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Favorite Quote:
"Effort makes you. You will regret someday if you don’t do your best now. Don’t think it’s too late but keep working on it. It takes time, but there’s nothing that gets worse due to practicing. So practice. You may get depressed, but it’s evidence that you are doing good."

"Living without passion is like being dead."

-Jungkook

this is really bad and horrible. plz dont do this...just STOP! it scared me

on Jul. 20 2019 at 5:50 pm
jayxilo826 BRONZE, Palmer, Alaska
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you truly love nature, you will find beauty everywhere." - Vincent Van Gogh

What genre is this song supposed to be?
The vibe I'm getting is a mix between Billie Eilish and TØP.

kim2004 said...
on Apr. 16 2019 at 10:42 am
kim2004, Springboro, Pennsylvania
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I love the emotion in the poem and how esally people can relate to it and it also really makes you think and i think its a beautiful symbol of of how teens feel

on Apr. 3 2019 at 9:00 am
Xx_KodaWolf_xX, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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I love the emotion put into this! You must've really thought about it to make it this powerful. I would love to see it published and put on Spotify or something. Definitely worth the views.

on Mar. 26 2019 at 2:06 pm
kpipsforme_11, Seoul, Other
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she must have gone through a breakup and turned into an emo/goth person who cuts their self to 'release the pain'

aivey19 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:38 pm
aivey19 BRONZE, Greenwood, Arkansas
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It really made me feeling something, and to me that is the whole purpose of poetry! Good Job!

on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:34 am
liamobuach BRONZE, Congers, New York
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the tone is so irregular and it doesn't flow :(

on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:16 am
liamobuach BRONZE, Congers, New York
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@MXRNXN i guess they never miss, huh.

MXRNXN said...
on Jan. 23 2019 at 1:42 pm
MXRNXN, Mornin, Arkansas
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hit or miss

on Dec. 20 2018 at 11:25 am
BillCipherTheDreamDemon, Eighty-Four, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity..."
- Edgar Allan Poe

I have been trying to come up with a song, but this is way better than what i have set up. AMAZING!

Kissae BRONZE said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 12:12 pm
Kissae BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The one who falls and gets back up again is so much stronger than the one who never falls.

oh my gosh, I was actually coming up with a song with similar lyrics. I promise I wasnt copying, I saw this when I was almolst done with my own lyrics. this is beautifull, thank you for making it!

Starshines1 said...
on Sep. 6 2018 at 11:15 am
Starshines1, Norfolk, Virginia
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I used to cut so I feel your words. As i sit in my room crying hoping noone comes in , listing to music to fit my mood, I simply was letting life crush my soul . stay strong and look up to the sky. the sun is shinning .

on Aug. 25 2018 at 12:18 pm
natalie_reed13 GOLD, Blair, Nebraska
16 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't play normal, play exceptionally.

I know exactly how you feel. Like last night. When you hold the blade in your hand and before you start you just hope to God that nobody will find you, that nobody will figure out. When I was sitting here I sang it the second time through and my gosh it was amazing. I just threw all the horrible feelings I have into it pretending it was my own cause it's how I also feel and I just thank you for that experience. Hold on;stay strong

on Jun. 11 2018 at 7:32 pm
QueenofAwkwardness BRONZE, Belding, Michigan
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I love it. it's deep. So stay strong I understand what ever your going through completely cuz I used to and I struggle with people accepting and understanding me. So I'm here if you need anything . But seriously I was singing the lyrics as I imagined them and o thought how is this not an existing song already it's brilliant.


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