Stardust

January 18, 2010
By musicalkat33 GOLD, SETAUKET, New York
musicalkat33 GOLD, SETAUKET, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want to do, someone will always love you"


On nights were the stars sit low
Magic takes place

A lone lover comes home
to what he used to be

Oh, that's the way it all feels when you are beside me

I feel your breathing
I feel you wishing

But none of that matters right here, right now
please stay in my arms

And just come home
That's where it all began

And just like Stardust on my mind
and just like angels in the sky
no matter where you are
I'm there
and no matter what you see
I care
And just like stars up in the sky
I'm with you everywhere
Everywhere and anywhere

Now they say beauty is the key
to a perfect harmony
But no matter what tries to change that
It will stay just as cruel
And that's the way it has been
for most centuries

No amount of wishing
No amount of praying

But lets go and celebrate the mediocrity
Because it makes up you
and it makes up me

And just like Stardust on my mind
And just like angels in the sky
no matter where you are i'm there
and no matter what you see I care
and just like stars up in the sky
I'm with you everywhere
Everywhere and anywhere

But its told that all is fair
In the acts of love and war
but its just you that I want
that and nothing more
So let the human race go out
Out and disappear
It's only us
Us and the stars out here

And Just like stardust on my mind
and just like angels in the sky
no matter where you are I'm there
no matter what you see I care

and just how on nights when the stars sit low
beauty is the key
and its just you that I want
to what we used to be
oh that's the way it all feels
for all of centuries
All amounts of wishing
All amounts of praying

But none of that matters right here right now
just please stay in my arms
Come home
That's where it all began


The author's comments:
This is the first form of poetry I ever wrote, probably my first and last about love. I hope people feel the same way about it that I do, that it's truthful and inspiring. I wrote this after getting a glimpse of what real love is, or was. It made me realize that nothing is written in the stars, hence Stardust

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on Feb. 12 2010 at 8:20 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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wow, the best peom i have read in a while, you should be proud of this. :)

on Feb. 12 2010 at 6:21 pm
musicalkat33 GOLD, SETAUKET, New York
11 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want to do, someone will always love you"

Thank you so much! Good reviews are just as inspiring as the poetry is !

on Feb. 12 2010 at 2:01 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is so delicate and beautiful.

I love it.

Keep writing.

Please check out my work.

Comment and rate if you wish.

Thanks.

Escaped GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 1:00 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
19 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:

Very beautiful(:

[ You should check out my poems, too^^]


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