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Hey Mr. Sunshine

Hey Mr. Sunshine

Hey Mr. Sunshine why don’t you come out, love?
You’ve been hiding in the clouds long enough,
Spread your arms of golden into our world,
Cause we all need you now.

Mr. Sunshine come knocking’ at my door,
I’ll give you everything you ask,
And maybe even more.
Come and spread your light in our town,
Stay with me and I’ll show you around.

Hey Mr. Sunshine it’s been raining for a week,
I’m getting tired and I wanna sleep.
You’d make my day,
If you stayed, so come out and play.

Mr. Sunshine I need you by my side
My day is bad, and I’m not having’ a good time,
Come and laugh with us,
Make our day feel great,
Cause we need you and we can’t wait.

Hey Mr. Sunshine, whisper words to me,
Tell me about the things I can’t see,
Tell us about the stars at night,
And tell us how it feels to fly.

Hey you Sunshine.
You better not forget,
to come out tomorrow,
Because if you don’t,
That would be bad!



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Jade B. said...
Mar. 3, 2012 at 8:33 pm
Wow that song was so catchy and just made my day, great work.
 
Ali936 said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 10:36 pm
Very good! I loved it! It was if I could sing a long! You have quite a way with words! Good job and please check out some things from me. :) Good job!
 
pandaLICIOUS replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 5:28 pm
Thank you! I would love to check out some of your work too :)
 
paigeforemanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 4:35 pm
This is a cute song and it has a good beat so I can sing along to it in my head. I can relate to it because I also have a Mr. Sunshine as well. Well done!

Also, do you mind checking out and rating my song "Lunar Eclipse?" I'd love feedback and a rating from a fellow poet!
 
pandaLICIOUS replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 6:17 pm
Thank you! And yes, I will definitely check your poem out :)
 
ButtercupBby said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 1:55 am
love the song
 
xFaLLeNxAnGeLx said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 3:50 pm
This is AMAZING!... heck out one of my songs people?   pleasseee   :)  
 
wendyleee said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 9:31 am

I love the enthusiasm of the song! I love the way I smile when I read it. One comment though, I think the song would conclude in a more interesting way if it connects or rhymes to some other phrases that you've mention earlier.

Anyway, I love this poem!

 
ThisLitIsBananas This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 9:54 am
Awww I love this!!!! I used it for my little box thingy below my profile picture on Facebook! I hope you don't mind! (I used the second-last verse because it's my favourite) Good job :)
 
pandaLICIOUS replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 10:29 am
That'so nice of you! I'm glad that you liked the poem! And you can definitely use it! :)
 
SunShineSparkle said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 1:13 pm
kind of reminds me of the mr sun song they sing on barnie and friends hey mr sun sun mr golden sun please comeout and play with me!!!!
 
pandaLICIOUS replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:36 pm
I never watched barney, so i wouldn't know!
 
SunShineSparkle replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 10:00 am
sorry, but i still like it it makes me feel happy cause it kind of reminds me of my boyriend who i call mi sunshine monkey, i mean who isint happy when the sunshine comes out.
 
pandaLICIOUS replied...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 12:45 am
haha it's okay! I love the sun too, but after a while I like my fair share of rain too! :)
 
Shea_N. said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 10:56 am
great poem! keep writing!
 
Arpanan said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 12:13 pm
It would be great if you guys could post some comments and give me some feedback on what was good, and what needs to be worked on! Remember, this is my first poem!
 
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