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Hey Mr. Sunshine

October 17, 2009
By pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” -Audrey Hepburn

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Hey Mr. Sunshine

Hey Mr. Sunshine why don’t you come out, love?
You’ve been hiding in the clouds long enough,
Spread your arms of golden into our world,
Cause we all need you now.

Mr. Sunshine come knocking’ at my door,
I’ll give you everything you ask,
And maybe even more.
Come and spread your light in our town,
Stay with me and I’ll show you around.

Hey Mr. Sunshine it’s been raining for a week,
I’m getting tired and I wanna sleep.
You’d make my day,
If you stayed, so come out and play.

Mr. Sunshine I need you by my side
My day is bad, and I’m not having’ a good time,
Come and laugh with us,
Make our day feel great,
Cause we need you and we can’t wait.

Hey Mr. Sunshine, whisper words to me,
Tell me about the things I can’t see,
Tell us about the stars at night,
And tell us how it feels to fly.

Hey you Sunshine.
You better not forget,
to come out tomorrow,
Because if you don’t,
That would be bad!

© Jeanne H., Pembroke, MA

The author's comments:
This piece came to me just like that. It was raining the day I wrote it, and I felt like I wanted to see some sun. I dedicate this piece to my grandpa, because he was my sunshine. Enjoy!
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This article has 16 comments.

SpreadUrWingzNFly BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2012 at 8:33 pm
SpreadUrWingzNFly BRONZE, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
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Wow that song was so catchy and just made my day, great work.
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 5:28 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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Thank you! I would love to check out some of your work too :)
AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 10:36 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
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Very good! I loved it! It was if I could sing a long! You have quite a way with words! Good job and please check out some things from me. :) Good job!
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 6:17 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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Thank you! And yes, I will definitely check your poem out :)
paigeforeman GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 4:35 pm
paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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This is a cute song and it has a good beat so I can sing along to it in my head. I can relate to it because I also have a Mr. Sunshine as well. Well done!

Also, do you mind checking out and rating my song "Lunar Eclipse?" I'd love feedback and a rating from a fellow poet!
ButtercupBby BRONZE said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 1:55 am
ButtercupBby BRONZE, Conyers, Georgia
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love the song
TooSoonToSayPerfect SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 3:50 pm
TooSoonToSayPerfect SILVER, Newmarket, Other
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This is AMAZING!... heck out one of my songs people?   pleasseee   :)  
wendyleee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 14 2010 at 9:31 am
wendyleee BRONZE, 266, Other
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I love the enthusiasm of the song! I love the way I smile when I read it. One comment though, I think the song would conclude in a more interesting way if it connects or rhymes to some other phrases that you've mention earlier.

Anyway, I love this poem!

pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 10:29 am
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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That'so nice of you! I'm glad that you liked the poem! And you can definitely use it! :)
IsobelFree DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 9:54 am
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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Awww I love this!!!! I used it for my little box thingy below my profile picture on Facebook! I hope you don't mind! (I used the second-last verse because it's my favourite) Good job :)
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 12:45 am
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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haha it's okay! I love the sun too, but after a while I like my fair share of rain too! :)
SunShineSparkle BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 10:00 am
SunShineSparkle BRONZE, Orange, California
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sorry, but i still like it it makes me feel happy cause it kind of reminds me of my boyriend who i call mi sunshine monkey, i mean who isint happy when the sunshine comes out.
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:36 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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I never watched barney, so i wouldn't know!
SunShineSparkle BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 1:13 pm
SunShineSparkle BRONZE, Orange, California
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System of A Down - MIND&quot;you need the ones you love and love the ones that you need&quot;, HYPNOTIZE&quot;Mesmerize the simple minded Propaganda leaves us blinded&quot;, SAD STATUE&quot;What is in us that turns a deaf ear to the cries of human suffering&quot;

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kind of reminds me of the mr sun song they sing on barnie and friends hey mr sun sun mr golden sun please comeout and play with me!!!!
Shea_N. BRONZE said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 10:56 am
Shea_N. BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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great poem! keep writing!
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 12:13 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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It would be great if you guys could post some comments and give me some feedback on what was good, and what needs to be worked on! Remember, this is my first poem!