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Guilty End

September 1, 2009
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)


[1st Verse]
I feel soo guilty
'cuz I know what i did
I hurt myself again
just like i knew i would
but i still did

[Chorus]
I'm guilty
i'll pay the price
blood or tears
which would you like
becasue tonight
i've shed both
and as they mix around me
I see
that everyone is better off

[2nd Verse]
I know i'm guilty
you told me not to
and i did
and now i'm gone
and your still sad

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
I couldin't take it
I was weak
I surrendered to the pain
you should be ashaimed (X3)


[3rd Verse]
& i'm still guilty
I've already payed the price
my blood on my hands
and the tears in your eyes
maybe you shouldn't of loved me
becasue it just hurt you
in the end



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on Jul. 30 2016 at 1:34 pm
pineappler03 SILVER, Waterford, Connecticut
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It's so amazing! It makes me want to cry and just read it on a countinuos loop.

on Aug. 7 2014 at 12:30 am
theallidiaries, Henerson, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality." -cheshire cat

it's really truly a great song! and your chorus is on point so just as advice i would slip in in there one more time and add a couple lines afterwards to really make the effect even better. amazing song though =)

JasonG. said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 11:46 am
JasonG., Otto, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
why work against the system when its easier to work with the system. -unknown

it made me cry when i read it, keep up the good work. work like this makes people stop and really think

:) keep it up


on Mar. 27 2011 at 11:33 am
XxTickleM3EmoxX PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
L.Why is everyone O. trying to find it? V. Maybe it's hidden for a reason...E.

If you look in the mirror and dont like what you see, you might find out first hand what its like to be me...

your great! im stunned! i like to sing but i cant really write songs... keep doing what you do! its amazingg!

on Sep. 24 2009 at 4:03 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you!

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 3:47 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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thats cool

on Sep. 24 2009 at 3:45 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Cool I just recently found that out by reading through and singing my songs. I have a wide range from sickly mushy that make me want to kick my self in the but and ones soo angry that I want to kick the other person lol

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 10:36 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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love and pain is my muse too

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:17 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Yeah It was from a really depressing time when my parents were divorcing. I write happy and sad ones now. Considering my muses are Love & dispair.

tee-hee

thanks for your comment, it is appreciated.

Annika GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:44 am
Annika GOLD, SIOUX FALLS, South Dakota
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thats really sad


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