Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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on Apr. 10 2010 at 1:59 pm
fob-fan5 SILVER, Brockon, Ma, Massachusetts
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wow reall? you should post it on youtube

Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 13 2010 at 7:39 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

awwww soooooo sweeet. having a special crush on someone. you should definently follow what you feel inside.

on Feb. 13 2010 at 6:14 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Awesome song.....cant wait 2 read the rest!!!! great job!!!! I lik how relateable it is. MayB check out some of my work?? I would b happy 2 hear some comments.

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 4:42 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

yup, i want to sing it, i even have music for it :)

on Jan. 22 2010 at 11:15 am
wonderful_kendra BRONZE, Deapauw, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
""I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when their right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust noone but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."
— Marilyn Monroe

awh, this is super cute! writing for a special crush?

on Jan. 8 2010 at 10:18 pm
CylasPalacios GOLD, Macomb, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 11 comments
short, sweet, to the point.

I love it

Meezy GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 3:53 pm
Meezy GOLD, Hutchinson, Kansas
10 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't think twice, it's all right.

Fabulous. Love it.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 10:41 am
Thank you perfect_11.

And you welcome Thandiwe...good work. Really.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:49 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L

this is nice!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 4:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks :) for the comment

on Dec. 18 2009 at 12:29 pm
wanghui138138 BRONZE, Providence, Rhode Island
4 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't fear anything other than giving up."

i like it! make it more original tho. good work

on Nov. 17 2009 at 2:22 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

yes please,please,please finish it!!! :]

mDawg said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 12:38 pm
Aww, this was cute. Finish it!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:20 am
debbieeee BRONZE, Port Washington, New York
2 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
We ignore the ones who adore us,
adore the ones that ignore us,
love the ones that hurt us, and
hurt the ones that love us.

i love it :] very creative.

lindsey said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 1:52 pm
I wrote almost the same poem, and honestly this poem is so true!! Ilove it!

on Nov. 15 2009 at 3:45 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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"Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind."

ok, i agree. i didn't even say why i didn't like it so i guess it would be different if i had.

on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:42 am
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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You have somewhat of a point.. but it just makes more sense to keep your negative comments to yourself.. its not like your giving them any advice.. that would be different

on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:28 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
29 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind."

what's the point of feedback if it's all positive? feel free to critique all of my work. that's why i put it up on this website. so ppl can tell me what's bad about it, not just that it's good.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:44 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Don't be too honest.. If your going to post a comment on someones work.. be respectful, and don't put down the author

meggers SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 10:50 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

wow i like it you should read the poem i posted called crush its the truth on wat a crush feels like


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