August 26, 2009
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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)

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DallysGrrl said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 6:14 pm
Awesome song.....cant wait 2 read the rest!!!! great job!!!! I lik how relateable it is. MayB check out some of my work?? I would b happy 2 hear some comments.
wonderful_kendra said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 11:15 am
awh, this is super cute! writing for a special crush?
Thandiwe replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 4:42 pm
yup, i want to sing it, i even have music for it :)
fob-fan5 replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 1:59 pm
wow reall? you should post it on youtube
CylasPalacios said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 10:18 pm
short, sweet, to the point.
I love it
Meezy said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 3:53 pm
Fabulous. Love it.
wanghui138138 said...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 12:29 pm
i like it! make it more original tho. good work
Thandiwe replied...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 4:12 pm
thanks :) for the comment
perfected_11 replied...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 12:49 am
this is nice!
wanghui138138 replied...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 10:41 am
Thank you perfect_11.
And you welcome Thandiwe...good work. Really.
mDawg said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 12:38 pm
Aww, this was cute. Finish it!
dragonfan replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 2:22 pm
yes please,please,please finish it!!! :]
debbieeee said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:20 am
i love it :] very creative.
lindsey said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 1:52 pm
I wrote almost the same poem, and honestly this poem is so true!! Ilove it!
megm5099 said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 10:50 am
wow i like it you should read the poem i posted called crush its the truth on wat a crush feels like
Thandiwe said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 2:51 pm
yeah, i looked at that song, i thought it was great!:) If you wanna see the rest of the song, just click more by this author, and then click on "Precious" :)
amanda727 said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 12:32 pm
It's pretty should finish it lol you should comment me too! I'm number 6 or something like's called Never Underestimate a Girl :)
yaelephant5 said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 10:19 pm
i'll be honest... i'm not a huge fan of this. its fine but nothing incredibe.
sweetNsour replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:44 pm
Don't be too honest.. If your going to post a comment on someones work.. be respectful, and don't put down the author
yaelephant5 replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 6:28 pm
what's the point of feedback if it's all positive? feel free to critique all of my work. that's why i put it up on this website. so ppl can tell me what's bad about it, not just that it's good.
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