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I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)




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CylasPalacios said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 10:18 pm:
short, sweet, to the point.
I love it
 
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Meezy said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 3:53 pm:
Fabulous. Love it.
 
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wanghui138138 said...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 12:29 pm:
i like it! make it more original tho. good work
 
Thandiwe replied...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 4:12 pm :
thanks :) for the comment
 
perfected_11 replied...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 12:49 am :
this is nice!
 
wanghui138138 replied...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 10:41 am :
Thank you perfect_11.
And you welcome Thandiwe...good work. Really.
 
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mDawg said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 12:38 pm:
Aww, this was cute. Finish it!
 
dragonfan replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 2:22 pm :
yes please,please,please finish it!!! :]
 
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debbieeee said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:20 am:
i love it :] very creative.
 
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lindsey said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 1:52 pm:
I wrote almost the same poem, and honestly this poem is so true!! Ilove it!
 
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megm5099 said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 10:50 am:
wow i like it you should read the poem i posted called crush its the truth on wat a crush feels like
 
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Thandiwe said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 2:51 pm:
yeah, i looked at that song, i thought it was great!:) If you wanna see the rest of the song, just click more by this author, and then click on "Precious" :)
 
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amanda727 said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 12:32 pm:
It's pretty good...you should finish it lol you should comment me too! I'm number 6 or something like that...it's called Never Underestimate a Girl :)
 
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yaelephant5 said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 10:19 pm:
i'll be honest... i'm not a huge fan of this. its fine but nothing incredibe.
 
sweetNsour replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:44 pm :
Don't be too honest.. If your going to post a comment on someones work.. be respectful, and don't put down the author
 
yaelephant5 replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 6:28 pm :
what's the point of feedback if it's all positive? feel free to critique all of my work. that's why i put it up on this website. so ppl can tell me what's bad about it, not just that it's good.
 
sweetNsour replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:42 am :
You have somewhat of a point.. but it just makes more sense to keep your negative comments to yourself.. its not like your giving them any advice.. that would be different
 
yaelephant5 replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 3:45 pm :
ok, i agree. i didn't even say why i didn't like it so i guess it would be different if i had.
 
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Z3bRUh said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:53 pm:
ugh don't stop here!!! keep going!
u gotta way with wordsss
 
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Michelle G. said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:02 pm:
DANG, THIS WAS GOOD, HURRY UP AND FINNISH it, homeboy got talent! dang, thats all i have to say
 
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